List builder landing page feedback

Hey, fellow Indie Hackers,

this week, I prepared a landing page to gauge the interest for my new upcoming product: Listifex, the list builder.

No, it's not about email lists! Instead...

Listifex makes it easy for you to create beautiful lists of things that you love and share them on social media.

You can see an example of what it does: I have created a list of iPhone models: starting with the first iPhone, via 3,4,5... all the way up to the latest "12 Pro Max".

https://twitter.com/listifex/status/1317794018676383746

The tool will make it easy to create such lists, and they look nice when shared on Twitter or other social networks.

I'd love your feedback because I wonder whether the home page (and the sample list page) are clear enough so that visitors can understand what purpose and benefit the tool will have.

For those of you who are really interested to use Listifex, please subscribe to my waiting list, using the email subscription form on the home page.

Questions? Post them below!

Thanks a lot...
Matthias

Matthias Bohlen

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on October 18, 2020

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Hi Mathias, thanks for sharing your interesting project,
Here a few observations which may be useful to you:

Listifex landing feedback for Mathias Bohlen - 20201019
https://share.vidyard.com/watch/fqLNewZCC4BXWjwT6vX8LP?

RobinGood

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  Hi Robin,
  
  thanks a lot for your video with the feedback about my landing page. I think you nailed it: "WHY should anyone use it?" and "WHAT lists can be created with it?" are the key questions that a user will have. The offer is not yet clear enough!
  
  I will have a look at your video again tomorrow and get back to you.
  
  Thanks for tonight and have a good time...
  Matthias
  
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A couple of issues I'd say you might want to address:
The examples section should be separated from other section and should not be presented using your Tweets, I think your Twitter account info should be in a different section.
I think there should be a contact/feedback/questions section - the e-mail address is barely visible or noticeable.
The waiting list form shouldn't take as much space as it does - it should be designed differently.
I think your website lacks some content - you need to add more relevant content to have an interested audience for your app, which can be done using personalization services (e.g Twik) that automatically optimize your website's content.

AlexScott988

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  Hi Alex, thanks a lot for your feedback. About the barely visible email address: Is it a contrast issue (orange text on white background)? Or do you mean that there should be a contact section that takes more screen space?
  
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