🗞️ 🎧 Looking for Landing Page feedback

Nice looking landing page! I like the palette you've chosen. A couple points:

• I'd move the 'Contact us' link to the footer for a cleaner look
• At first I didn't realise the images on the phone graphic changed - maybe look into making this a little more obvious? Potentially with a different transition?
• Your body element needs an overflow-x: none;

I think adding a subscribe button for the Android version is a good idea, and I agree with @vitabenes that the download button should be larger.

Simple that's good. I'd make the download button larger. Also, the text in the image is too small to read. Why is there a horizontal scroll bar visible - resize the page to fit.

hey!

first, thanks for following me and my project! really appreciate that!

second... i like what you've done with the landing page.

but, i'm not super-impressed with the title and the sub-head at the very top.

"be in the know"

i know what that means but is that really why i want to download or use your app? "being in the know" can mean a lot of things...

sub-head flow feels off with a few words. what about:

Business and Tech news in 10 seconds (or less)—we summarize what you need to know, fast.

something fun about that. and, i can connect with "10 seconds" more than 80 words. i mean, i get what you're doing, but, i want to save time, right? so, connect me with the idea of time!

(i'm making a guess on the amount of time it takes to read 80 words... so, you choose the number there!)

Hey @TidBeatsOrg. Sounds like a good concept to get news for the people who are always on the go. The image was loading forever 🤕.
In case you’re still looking for more feedback, I’ll be more than happy to give you my detailed thoughts.

Me and my partner will be giving personal real-time feedback in a video chat for this whole week to help other founders.
Check out http://flounders.io/ for the details.
Hope to see you there.

P.S.: Anyone who wants to get feedback is also welcomed 👍

Hey, I highly recommend you check out app.landen.co , as I think you can do better then this. Here’s an example of a site I built with landen that in super happy with:

codernotes.io

Hi. Not a fan of the palette. Perhaps make the background colour and phone background colour different to try some contrast. The text in the phone image is too small. Best of luck.

Looks solid, but on my computer it loads fairly slow, even though my connection is very fast. Upon inspection, it seems you're loading in a bunch of (very large) pictures right in the beginning, which "blocks" the browser and results in a jagged experience.

Also, I see other posters are mentioning a carousel. I see none of that in my browser (Firefox on macOS), but I assume that's what the pictures are for.

That said, I like the colour pallette a lot, and the name is also pretty sweet. :)

I don’t think the carousel is very effective. I would add a headline above (the one about business and tech news in 80 words would be a good choice as it clearly conveys what the product is and what makes it different in specific terms) and show the product on the phone screen.

Then you can take the slides about the features and display them below. That will make it easier to read and also fill out the page a little which add the the perceived value.

As others have mentioned, you should also get the CTA above the fold.

Best of luck!

I like the minimal approach! I would however like some more context/info (I needed to go to your app store listing to understand what it does). How about including your app store description on the landing page?

"TidBeats is a curated short news app designed to provide latest Business and Technology news in 80 words or less. We curate articles and topics from all over the world and provide summaries in digestible format. Save your time by reading or listening to the summaries."

Interesting color palette! 🙃

Yeah, I’d let the Linux via Google crowd know when a version is ready for them. 😏