What I head in my mind was so much simpler, less colorful version of this no animations at all. However thanks to the cruip people and their charming free templates. I started to fiddle with one of theirs.
I'm glad that I finally take the leap to finish(start) it. I've put a reward for myself to work on an idea that I like but probably not profitable :). Before I jump to that, it's time for the roast. Make me regret for not outsourcing the design/copy or having a landing page at all.
I've managed to sell 2 copies with this post maybe I should keep it that way huh?
BTW claps for the domain please. 🤦♂️
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Anil, good that you shared your goals. Hopefuly we can help you with accountability for this project. As to your questions, more copy. I think you have a funny tool, quite straightforward. But you need to elaborate a lot more.
I would google something like best landing pages 2020, pick one of them, and fill in the content they advise. Quick and dirty. Optimize later with analytics.
Should be something like,
Maybe work with different plans (updated data, specific topics,.. see if you can segment it)
I hope you finish this project, good luck man!
Hey, Maeva.
Thanks for dropping by. When you said, more copy. I've lost my breath for a second or two. To write that 3-5 sentences I've wasted about 2 weeks. But is lacks all the fundamentals I agree. I didn't position it right, didn't explain it well enough, and didn't tried to convince potential customers.
I'm gonna spare a day solely for the copy. Not just for this project but that's a skill I'll always need. Since these little projects are for experiment and experience. I shall stop procrastinating about it.
Thanks again for the pinpoints, I'll go over on each one by one.
It's a skill that might take some time to develop. But once you get your mojo going, you'll discover it's an essential one that you can apply to all your other projects. #skillbuildingftw
Hey @anilkilic I see why you want people to roast your landing page :)
Look 💸💸💸 It's flying away of your landing page.
Hey, let me get some :cages:. Where do you think I'm losing them?
There: Producthunt Archive. What You'll Get (make it a bullet list), [73462 rows x 23 columns],
Also you don't look to solve a problem just to have the archive of porduct hunt.
You seem to have manage to sold two with this page. Now image if you have a landing page that bring conversion you deserve.
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Thanks for pointing it out, I'm gonna go over it one more time. If I keep struggling to come up with a good copy. I'll be in touch.