Hey everyone, this is the first time I've ever had to build a landing page, would be absolutely amazing to get some feedback please. At the moment its mostly to validate our concept though we do have 4 mentors ready and waiting and a few interested parties in our personal networks. Look forward to hearing your thoughts! - http://miyagii.co/
The thoughts I had:
thanks for the feedback really helpful, will definitely work this into our model.
3.Yeah totally agree, once up and running each mentor will have a profile, description and reviews.
Huge thanks again for the advice
Hi Simon,
I like the name + concept. Not sold on to the two i's at the end.
who are your competitors and what is your differentiation?
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You use it in 2 places on your site, and I find it quite bad for readability, especially under "how it works".
instead, use:
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re: the purpose of the landing page -- I feel like it's too early / pointless to sign up. So I don't think the landing page will show if there is interest in the idea.
You aren't the first/only mentorship site, so maybe some more information on why I should be excited about this site in particular would be useful.
Cheers & good luck
Thanks for the insight @sobbuh definitely hadnt considered these, so super handy.
with the name, preferred miyagi but just couldnt get the domain, finding the domain for our preffered name was proving a challenge. With this were thinking of an updated logo with the first "i" having a higher dot, and 2nd "i" a lower mark. Thinking it portrays a senior and junior, suggesting mentorship.
Main competitors are clarity.fm, then mentorship programs and mentorship programmes.
Our main diffrentiation
clarity.fm - this is geared towards technical expertise, you visit the site to speak with a professional on say seo only, for a one off period.
mentorship programmes - these are slow moving with limited options with regards to who your mentor is, and limited access to information.
Were building a platform to make it easier to find a mentor, for ongoing support and guidance. Speaking with a mentor you choose on a monthly basis for on going support on your journey.
Were considering making it a subscription agreement between mentor and mentee, though this may be hard to make work I think it lends itself well to both parties.
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Will make sure to fix this.
Thanks agin, really appreciate the feedback!