Hey hackers 👋
I am building a (for now, human AI) project to help founders reach out to their network with greater intentionality and warmth.
Pain point: spending 30 minutes on Sunday drafting/ re-drafting a message to the guy with the goal of getting a coffee or jumping on Zoom.
Solution: a tool that centres your message around something personal to that individual (a recent blog post, a new job they have, a sport they are a fan of) whilst conveying your point in a succinct and context specific manner.
Background: My (usually introverted) friends who are Indie Hackers/ early stage founders struggle when it comes to connecting with people who I will term "professional friends". I have conducted 30 interviews to validate this pain point and now it is time to test a quick and dirty MVP.
These are not your inner circle who can be mindlessly whatsapp'd at 2 a.m.
Question: What are your thoughts on the landing page text? I feel the clarity is poor and generally a little bit confusion.
Any suggestions would be awesome, thank you!