Let's visit each other's landing pages and describe them.
Here's mine freshly out of my drafts join.coulf.com. Been working on the concept for a little over a couple of months, IH is the only site that has helped me reach here.
So it's my turn to share my thoughts on fellow IH projects
:) What do you think of mine = https://www.youtube.com/c/LandingFeedback
The problem with content like this is (sadly) most people don't care.
Because it is landing page feedback for "orlie" it is his problem, not mine. You can instead say "What can orlie.website do better" "Where did orlie go wrong" "What's working for orlie and maybe for you too?" "The best and worst of orlie" "Follow orlie's design to succeed" — I'm over suggesting here but I think you got the point.
Gotcha, so you're saying I need to make the content more generic! Cool, I am glad more people are saying the same feedback that means that it's exactly that the weakness of my channel!
Cheers!