Hi, I'm Sewell Stephens. I'm the owner of Sewell Stephens software. More on that at https://sewellstephens.com. I am roasting landing pages here since I don't see other people doing it as much as I wish.
Just post your landing page below and I will give you an outline of what I think looks good, what needs changing, and what could be improved.
Here are the guidelines:
First, make sure the link is actually a link. I see where some people forget to put the protocol before the link. For instance, if I just sewellstephens.com or www.sewellstephens.com, that may not be recognized as a link since webpages aren't search engines. To ensure the link actually works, type https:// before the link.
Second, please only post landing pages. This group is called "Landing Page Feedback", not "Web Page feedback".
And that's all. Now it's time to post your landing page. Have fun.