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Ready for Round 2 of Feedback for TurboNav! Don't Hold Back!

So long story short went from super.so to webflow.com. I felt limited to what I could do with super.so for a landing page (still using it for my blog), so I made the switch yesterday.

After a few headaches, I refactored my landing page to a cleaner design and reduced a ton of wordy copy. I'm hoping this improves the number of users that sign up.

First of all thanks to @Haikuka for the feedback I received in this post: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/is-your-landing-page-talking-to-the-reader-i-ll-review-your-site-3f767bac37

There was a ton of great points and did my best to address them as I was refactoring my landing page.

Here you go, share your thoughts and opinions! https://turbonav.com.

If you have issues with browser tabs and would like to connect to discuss in more detail let me know!

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    Looks amazing! Love the design and the clarity!

    Re @GrowthHunt's interesting comment, I looked at your competitors. Workona is targeting teams & workflow. Onetab is focused on optimizing your experience (Chrome really does eat RAM). Sooo, to position yourself in the middle...

    Take a look at this risque option: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xYYk3SWN-F-C763WNmPwbOnBKthFuepq/view?usp=sharing

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      Hey Claire 👋, glad you like the new design.

      Yup, Workona and Onetab are definitely at the top of my competitors' list. I definitely have an eye on Onetab's userbase so will lean on them first and then tackle Workona!

      I like the adjustment to the hero text haha definitely risque, will see how I can make it my own 😊! thanks for the feedback

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    Love the clean design and layout you got there !

    I'm no expert on landing page design but what do you think about replicating this strategy (if it applies to you):

    Positioning your product to your biggest competitor that many people are aware of, and highlight how different your product is to the competitor without wasting more time trying to educate the audience while still getting your UVP across to them.

    I learnt this from this case study.

    If you are interested, I curates and summarised more growth strategies posted by founders over at GrowthHunt.co.

    Cheers and all the best!

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      hmm, yeh absolutely!
      I've talked to a few people and they immediately mention OneTab or Workona. Definitely, those are the two main competitors I've been keeping an eye on.

      I like the idea. thanks for sharing that with me, will add that to my backlog to review next week

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        If it helps, I'd love to offer a free access to my database for you in exchange for some feedbacks.

        If you're interested, drop your email and complete a quick survey here: https://growthhunt.co/#database

        Cheers!

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          cool deal, I signed up. Looking forward to chatting with you and giving you feedback

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            Many thanks Miguel. Looking forward to working together.

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              sorry, been busy on building my MVP. Hoping for a soft release in two weeks.
              I'll definitely check it out. Likely will be this Thursday

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