I've made a few light but important text updates to my landing page...
... would you mind ripping me a new one with your thoughts?
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I've got my big-boy pants on... so, go for it. Thanks!
Thanks for the feedback! I've updated it:
Thanks for the feedback! I was trying to be a bit too "clever" with this last pass and it really didn't land the way I thought it was going to land.
This latest iteration is much more "plain" in approach, using "non-fluffy" language... I hope.