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🔥 Roast My landing Page

Hi makers,

I just reviewed my landing of one of my side projects.

If you can give me some honest feedback.
Don't hesitate.

To thank you, if you are interested in the content, send me a DM on twitter or here and I will offer you 10% on the offer of your choice.

Thanks for your help

Here is the landing page

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    "read more" button is useless. By the way, which stack would you use for this project? http://razum.app/
    I couldn't find proper web app builders apart from bubble. Adalo have an option to do web app, but doesn't look appealing.

    1. 1

      This looks to be built with tilda. for the website.

      For the stack, it's true that adalo seems to match.
      Have you tried Glide?

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        Glide would work for showing a fuckup database, but not for creating user metrics and stuff

  2. 2

    I will work on this yellow tone with this border shadow, it's too bright I think.
    But I like the concept, keep going!

    Cheers

    1. 1

      Thanks. I changed some colors because I thought this yellow was too light

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    I feel like it does a good job. But it took me a bit of reading to understand fully that it was a "full stack" solution, from idea to helping you build it.

    The whole concept seems interesting though, and seems like there's a market for it. Kind of reminds me of softwareideas.io but with the building part.

    1. 1

      Thanks for your feedback.
      I will improve the wording.

      And yes it's like software idea but with the construction part.

  4. 1

    Hey 👋 Victor

    Great landing page. I found a few issues to make it even better 🔥

    1. Would be great to add email field when you propose free pack. Right now, it redirects to the other page with decent design and carrd subdomain.
    2. Remove dot before rocket emoji :.🚀 From the idea to the construction, everything happens in The Garage"
    3. When I click on "More information" button nothing happens

    Anyway, site looks awesome. I would list it on Microns.io 😁

    Btw, what resources do you use to write about trends and validated ideas?

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      Hey, thanks for your feedback.
      Yes I have a small bug that I will fix and thanks for the rest I will fix it.

      With pleasure to list it on micro ions.
      Don't you only list sites for sale?

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        Yeah, man. Let me know if you have any questions.

  5. 1

    Kudos on launching your side project.

    After a quick once-over, it still wasn't clear to me what the product actually is and how it works. I only really understood it after I read your answer here to @sidevesh's comment.

    Also, the copy should be more customer-centric: it seems like there is a lot of "we" and "The Garage Studio", and relatively little "you". Here's Joanna Wiebe on this subject, starting at 12:45:

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GEE7Xr_a0ZU

    Wishing you success with this.

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      Yes, many of you are telling me that. I will review the wordings

      Thank you. For your feedback

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    I loke the idea, although the landing page looks bit too rough, odd contrast of text in places with blue on blue, the Log out button shows for me on top even though I haven't logged in yet.
    Also, I am still unclear after going through the page whether it includes building an MVP with no code or is it just guidance and resources.

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      Thanks for your feedback.
      For the colors I'm looking at other possibilities.

      These are resources and guidance for creating an MVP without code.

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