Hi, I like the simple no frills website flow. It works well while a product is in development.
Banner screen and messaging works well
I do want to know how the product works and who is it for, you may want to tailor it more towards specific audience - are they digital marketers for companies or people building their personal brand etc.
On my screen the bottom two boxes - grow your audience and the other are getting cropped from the bottom. The last lines are only have visible. You might want to fix that.
I like it. Especially the last bit about helping us get to 10k. That said, I’d try to shorten some of the other copy where possible.
For example, I’d probably try something like the following and see how it looked/read..
“Don’t spend time calculating when your next tweet should be and making useless clicks. Supertweet cuts all of that out and lets you do what actually grows your audience.”
—>
Create a tweet schedule with one click - so you can focus on growing your audience.
“Track your progress and get useful insights into your audience through detailed analytics on the same platform.”
—>
Gain useful insights about your audience with detailed analytics.
Hi, I like the simple no frills website flow. It works well while a product is in development.
On my screen the bottom two boxes - grow your audience and the other are getting cropped from the bottom. The last lines are only have visible. You might want to fix that.
Good luck :)
(1) Really like your catchy headline. The subtitle is also quite concrete to understand.
(2) The whole page only uses green, which can feel a bit "monotonous"
(3) Might be good to add a "How it work" section?
(4) "Supertweet follows all of Twitter’s Terms of Service,so you can be sure your account is safe." -> Need a space before "so"?
Finally, appreciate if you could roast our landing page as well 🤝 Thanks!
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/please-roast-or-toast-our-landing-page-an-app-for-learning-content-discovery-daa645749f
I like it. Especially the last bit about helping us get to 10k. That said, I’d try to shorten some of the other copy where possible.
For example, I’d probably try something like the following and see how it looked/read..
“Don’t spend time calculating when your next tweet should be and making useless clicks. Supertweet cuts all of that out and lets you do what actually grows your audience.”
—>
Create a tweet schedule with one click - so you can focus on growing your audience.
“Track your progress and get useful insights into your audience through detailed analytics on the same platform.”
—>
Gain useful insights about your audience with detailed analytics.
HTH
Thanks for the suggestion! I will try to shorten the copy and make it more to the point.