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Roast my landing page, and I'll do the same for yours

https://ufeed.app

Hi all,
I'd love if you can check my landing page and provide feedback about it and the product in general.

If you leave your landing page, I'd be happy to return the favor.

  1. Is the value prop clear?
  2. Do you like the hero text?
  3. What do you think about the product in general?
  4. Any other piece of feedback?
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    1. Not really. I would take it away from the 💩 as that is not the only time someone is looking for content. I get way you do it but for me it triggered other thoughts than you are trying to get.
    2. I would have the text on the left only. And keep the H1 & H2 and deleting the H3. Would also change the text of H2. Give them your solution; "Your own personal content creator" or something like that.
    3. Im not sure, this way I will never see something new right? As in a new topic which I didn't find interesting before.
    4. Do a survey if people are really looking for something like this

    Here's is mine: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-we-help-saas-businesses-grow-by-73f581b092

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      1. Value prop and product is very clear.
      2. Headline is attracting and the bullets are great
      3. Consider adding more testimonials and place it higher up
      4. Screenshots or a demo video might help
      5. Add no-code solution to integrate with webflow wordpress etc.
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    1. It took me a while to figure it out. Its basically a bookmarking system that you can use from multiple devices, right?
    2. I actually got the wrong idea from the hero text. I thought it subscribed you to newsletters and feeds. The "Control the content you consume" section was far more useful in understanding the product, in particular this: Save content from around the web and access your personal feed across devices.
    3. I see the use case as I run into the issue myself. I don't know if I could get over the hurdle of paying a monthly subscription fee for a solution because its not that big of an issue to me, but that's just my personal take. I think other people / non-developers might.
    4. The product actually makes sense, I think the landing page needs work though. An illustration could explain it much better, like multiple devices with content on them pointing to a single screen with the feed.

    Here's mine: https://pickle.bigbunny.io/

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      1. your hero section is slightly confusing. I think your sub headline needs to me more clear and direct

      2. Your first illustration is really good and clear. But then it becomes confusing with one illustration after the other.

      3. I suggest you a "how it works" section instead of the unorganized illustrations. Walk the user step by step

      4. You can also add a "features" section to show case some of the stuff you mention in a more easy to read way

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        Thanks, the review is much appreciated. Definitely a case of "I built it so I know how it works", but presenting it in an easy to understand way is surprisingly tricky. Adding a "how it works" section in particular I think is a very good idea.

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    1. I didn't find any value prop.

    2. the Main headline is not clear however the subheadline give enough context about "what the product is"

    3. No one can tell you the product is good or not until you don't do the user research by yourself or hire someone.

    4. Hero area can be improved you don't need to put lots of things at one time an attention-grabbing value proposition will be enough!

    5. Your website copy is not targeting the customer internal problem(not sure it's true but I think it can be).

    6. Copy that explaining about the product looking a little bit vague use simple English for explaining about it!

    7. CTA is not clear

    Now, it's your turn www.khadush.com

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      Thanks for the feedback! Not sure I fully understand the feedback re #5. Can you tell me more?

      1. Hero headline - really like it. Clean and clear. Shouldn't website be plural? as in "I create... websites"

      2. Main CTA - Personally I feel that contact forms are slightly outdated. Especially with long form questions. Try typeform or add a chatbox (i.ei intercom) for a more interactive contact

      3. Download my free PDF - Unclear what is the PDF about, how it'll help me and why I should download it

      4. Testimonials - this is the most important this with consulting websites. Place it higher, make it much clearer (e.g. add the persons image) and consider making it visible above the fold.

      5. "SAVE TIME AND MONEY" - This is unclear to me. Is it because you are low-cost and provide fast turn around? If so, just write that.

      6. in general, there are many consultants out there who do web optimization. Why should I choose you? That's why I think testimonials are critical. But also, provide link to your portfolio, articles and other stuff that will prove me that you are better than the competition.

      p.s - How did you build your landing page? is it html or are you using some platform?

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        #5 "Internal and external problem" This term was discovered by Donald miller.

        In real people don't buy for external problem. For example: If my washroom tap got broken, then it's evident that I will hire a plumber.

        Hiring for fixing that tap is an external problem, and I can hire any plumber for it! But in reality, we(including me) always let the tap fix by only one plumber, which we have trust(similar to a family doctor). Why?

        because we have an internal fear that another plumber don't charge extra money or maybe he is not trustworthy and will not guide us properly.

        That's what we call internal and external problem

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        Thank you much for the feedback. Actually, I forgot to mention that it's not a landing page it's a website but anyway thank you for your feedback I will work on it!

        I build my website using elementor. I designed it in Figma then build it on Wordpress using Elementor.

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    First of all: I like the idea. Some quick improvements you could do:

    • add something to the "menu" at the top (the invite button for example)
    • I don't know how well search engines handle emojis, but you might want to use actual words for SEO
    • add a footer with copyright, links to social media, pages, legal stuff, ...
    • add more spacing

    Here is ours: https://pirsch.io/ I'm curious what you'll think about it :)

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      Thanks!

      1. Your hero section is really good. The sub heading is too long and throughs a bunch stuff at the user (simple, privacy friendly, alternative to GA, lightweight, etc.). It's clear that your'e trying to optimize for SEO.

      2. The second section can be improved a lot. "Set up for the Future, Today." doesn't tell me anything. It can literarily be attached to any b2b product. Then on the right side you have a bunch of text. Consider breaking it to 3-4 benefits and bold the main stuff.

      3. Add testimonials, seen at, or anything to provide social proof

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        Thanks for your feedback :) We have some ideas for point 3. and will look into the others.

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    Not a roast, but I do have a question:

    Does this app imply that I'm the one that's finding the content and saving it?

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      Yes! Personally, I'm subscribed to 10+ newsletters and find 5+ articles I'd like to read every day on IH.

      So my app is a solution to people like me to get on top of their reading list

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