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Roast my landing page 😅

Hey Guys,

I have been working on Mailter, an autopilot for sending newsletters and other user communication, for some time now. Help me improve my landing page. 🙏

Are you able to understand the product offering just by the landing page? Will you sign up for a private beta.

https://mailter.app

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    👋 I would recommend adding a favicon. Easy to do and makes the tab nicer.

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    I definitely get IFTTT vibes, which I assume served as some inspiration. I would recommend some screenshots of the actual app / user admin to help show how it works.

    Also on the main headline: "Your Autopilot for authentic User Engagement". I would try a different word besides authentic. If I get any response, it's likely an authentic one. However, I assume most potential customers will want to increase response rate.

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      Response rate sounds better but I was not sure I could use it without having it proven. I will definitely include a video of the actual product. Thanks for the feedback. :)

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    • on mobile some text is covered by images
    • These are some of the messiest images I've seen in a while are you trying to convey a complex, messy product? Or just the users head?
    • The entire top doesn't say anything meaningful to know what this is.
    • The message isn't too clear is this a marketing mailer (ex MailChimp) with zappier built in?(for a tiny few integrations)
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      Thank you so much. I will work on the fixes.
      Yes, it will be able to combine Mailchimp and Zapier but will also be able to do more than that. I will rephrase the positioning.

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    I think everything has been said, good job btw.

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    Please use SVGs. I have an 27" and I see pixels :D

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    Dumb user here!

    The main thing is I not sure what benefit I get from this. I might be less educated on the subject than others, but what’s the problem I have that means for example MailChimp would fall short? Why am I not getting the user engagement I need from that whereas your product gives that to me?

    Ignore me if you know your audience already knows enough that they’ll understand your headlines.

    Also from a style point of view on mobile some images overlap text (iPhone 6)

    Congrats on shipping!

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      Hey,

      Thanks for the feedback. So we are trying to build a layer on top of Mailchimp that would automate a lot of things for you.
      It is not just your conventional IFTTT over Mailchimp, rather a smart assistant that helps automate a lot of your user engagement tasks like sending out newsletters (to start with).
      Regarding Mobile, I will sort it out.

      Thanks for your feedback. :)

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    Pretty neat landing page! I like the colors and the layout, straight to the point.

    On the flip side:

    • Consider using SVGs instead of PNG
    • "Connect with your audience consistently with our easy to use platform" is a pretty weak statement. What is "consistently", what is "easy to use" ? I'm not convinced.
    • I understand what your product does, but not how it achieves it? Is it a web-app, is it an API ? I'm not sure
    • Consider having videos / gifs showing how this integrates within my current workflow.

    Keep it up :) !

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      Reflex is coming up with SVG support, we will add it then.
      It is a web app. I will rephrase the positioning.
      Videos are a nice idea. I will add them for better clarity

      Thank you for your support!

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      Thanks for the screenshot. Will fix it.

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