Roast my landing page for PullThunder ⚡️

You need to describe the problem more, and then go into how you solve it. By starting with the features, you're requiring the reader to already agree with the problem and be searching for a solution.

The stages of awareness are a good thing to read about:
https://www.sproutmarketer.com/stages-of-customer-awareness

You had a good story here https://www.indiehackers.com/post/is-this-a-great-idea-to-ship-code-faster-37d4d548d8, maybe incorporate some of this into the site.

I just shipped https://criteria.sh if you want to check it out :)

My comments are based on first impressions:

Design:

The fundamentals of the design are good. I would be surprised if you weren't using Tailwind CSS. I would add more graphics that show off the platform (notifications, insights, etc.).

Copy:

Not a lot to judge here, but what little copy is there is decently written, concise, and to the point. You state the value (hero) and how you arrive at it (features).

Content:

This is where you're severely lacking. There doesn't seem to be any depth at all to the presentation. There has got to be more you can say and show to sell the product. Otherwise, I think it'll be an uphill battle for you to get users to convert.

Overall, I think this is a good start, but it's just that; a start. Build it out further before putting it out into the market. :)

I love the layout. But you asked. So here you go:

"...ship code faster than [ever] before." ➦ I like the sound of this with the "ever" added

"Notify me when it released" ➦ "I want early access"

Powerful. Features. ➦ The period after powerful doesn't belong.

This is awkward: "Set your pull requests reminders schedule and filters to remind your team only about what matters." ➦ "Set and schedule pull request reminders and filter only what matters for your team."

"Get insights and statistics about your team work, by tracking and rewarding your team members." ➦ The cause and effect is confusing to me. Does this fit? "Get insights and statistics about your team using intelligent tracking so you can effectively reward your team members."

Why free? ➦ How about, "Free for Life!"

"Every feature we talked about above, will stay free forever for early adopters. as we care about your feedbacks to improve PullThunder in order to help developers and teams using bitbucket cloud to ship code faster than before."
➦ "In exchange for our early adopters' feedback, every feature above will stay free forever! PullThunder helps developers and teams leverage bitbucket cloud more effectively so they can ship code faster than ever before."

Subscribe to beta list ➦ "I want early access"

✅ Simple and effective design, I assume it's TailWind?
✅ Call to action tells me this is pre-launch, I can leave my email (...consider changing the text of the button however to something like "Notify me when it launches")
🆘 H1 and H2 are repetitive, you use the same sentence twice "ship code faster". Instead focus on the how!
🆘 Features list is whack. You need to focus on the problems you solve for the end-user - not the features you developed (less important than solving actual problems. FOR EXAMPLE: never be late again for Y, never forget again X)
🆘 No info in footer, no about page, no screenshots of product (even mock/designs)

Looks really nice, congrats!

Some feedback:

Banner
I like it. I'd leave it as is.

Features

• "Powerful. Features." doesn't really respond to the question you ask right on top of it. How about: "What can it do? Powerful. Stuff."
• Feature request button steals the show. Maybe you place it under the list of features? That way users will read the features first and then see this option. Maybe even get rid of the warning color and make it more neutral

Why free?
Indeed, why free? Especially forever? It's good to be generous but you should also think about future. Maybe you change this to something like "Free forever for early adopters". That way you also create urgency to sign up as it won't be free later.

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If you fancy to roast me back, here's a landing page I just launched 😇 😇

https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-i-will-roast-yours-f10845c72d