🔥Roast🔥 the 'C' part of my B2B2C landing page!
Hey IHers - you guys were great the first time around giving solid advice on the business part of our landing page. Would be awesome to get the collective brain insights on the consumer focusing part too! 🙏
Right now the site won't win any beauty pageants, but it would be great to know if you think the language lands. Does it make you want to join the waitlist? If not, what would?
In exchange, happy to review & roast anyone else's landing page or MVP!
Thank you all!
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Looks good on mobile. How is this B2B2C?
Thanks Sergeis! Did it make sense to you? Do you understand what it does?
You're right, it's not strictly B2B2C, but we have consumer-facing and business-facing aspects (we're not a marketplace either).
Yeah I understood quite quickly. I wasn’t being ironic with the last question. I literally see the term being used online with different meanings so I was curious which one is the correct one lol.
I'm confused for a few reasons:
Is StreemPay a play on words for "Streaming" like YouTube, Twitch, etc. and you want me to pay for "stream"-based content?
What is the benefit of me paying for a subscription for a majority of already "free" content on these platforms? Unless it's not "Streaming" and it's content as another user mentioned-geared towards the Medium crowd. Which even then is a long shot of a niche of a niche monetization effort.
Let your "content" breathe, the text and content elements are too close. Don't be scared to increase those margins and get some breathing room into the "flow" of information.
If StreemPay is not for "streaming" that is going to be a steppe climb to education people that it's not what they initially think it is.
Hi Sodux - great questions!
StreemPay can be used for any type of online content. Right now we are focusing on publishers, but it could also be used for video, audio, livestreaming, etc.
It's up to businesses to decide what they want to use it for. You're right, there's a lot of content out there that is already free and so we're not needed. But there are lots of publishers struggling to monetize content and paywalls/monthly subscriptions can only go so far. This is potentially another tool for them.
Super tip! Have reworded a lot and added more white space.
Yes, perhaps. Hopefully it becomes fairly intuitive once they see demos, videos, etc.
I've had a play around with it. Would you have time to take one more look at it to see if it's any clearer? 🙏
The spacing is much better. The messaging is much clearer. Now just fix the load times on the site. It should not take over 3 seconds for some text to appear especially for your "hero/intro" element.
Like do you offer $ spend limits?...
Anything that auto charges me by things I don't understand is a no-no. Hopefully your just using that sentence as creative... that's a bad one..
is this an attempt on a multi site medium replacement with a different better for owner less for customer payment module?
Thanks so much! You're right, will work to make it sounds less scary (it really isn't) and to include all the controls and transparency mechanisms we have. Thanks again!
a screenshot can also help if you already have something even if a sketch
I've had a play with it - do you mind taking a quick look at it again? Your advice has been super helpful!
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Thank you - this was actually really good feedback. Prompted me to rethink it from the beginning. Would you mind taking another look to see if it makes sense now? 🙏
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Ah, cool, yes I see what you mean. For now we're just focusing on publishers or any site where you could pay for 'scrollable' content, i.e. text, pictures, e.g. any blog site, online newspaper, magazine, industry research, etc. Video, audio, livestream will come later.
I'll have a think about the sub-hero statement...
Thanks again!
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