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Seeking feedback for main MVP headline

by Jacek

Do you understand that sentence?

Reach the highest conversion & speed up your growth using dedicated shortcuts.

You probably don't know yet what do I mean by 'dedicated shortcuts'. Is it sth that interests you so you potentially might scroll down to see?

PS. It's for the agency which actually provides conversion-focused actions.

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    Hi.

    Trying to help with some feedback.
    I did scroll down and found... nothing

    salvadorellana
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    4 years ago
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    "Dedicated shortcuts" makes no sense to me, never heard that phrase being used before. I'll be just confused and leave rather than explore more.

    zerotousers
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    4 years ago
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