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Share your landing page and I'll tell you how I'd improve it.

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    App Support Platform
    Hi Anthony 👋
    This is mine: App Support Platform: https://appsupports.co

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      Hey Stephan, here's my first impressions https://www.loom.com/share/b9e340f012cc418aa48b6c1d3a43916e

      Summary:

      • Too much text, cluttered
      • Copy is not clear
      • Missing a true CTA, the one button I see on the page takes me to something irrelevant
      • Improve the design of the rankings sections for readability and to give yourself more landing pages for SEO
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        Thank you very much Anthony🖖

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    hey, I'm just helping the dev of this page. This app let's you generate thousands of NFT art without coding within minutes https://nft.appsus.co.uk

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      Here you go David https://www.loom.com/share/cabc8c08695c412a874aef4eb5804fa7

      • Love the neon on black aesthetic
      • That demo gif is perfect
      • Get a better domain name
      • bi-line should focus on no-code not "4-simple steps"
      • Add a "powered by" at the bottom to drive traffic/link-juice back to the main domain.
      • Collect my email.
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        Hey, Thank you so much for the feedback! We really appreciate it! We are now working on the changes. Cheers!

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    We are launching GrabStar to ProductHunt next week.
    https://grabstar.io/

    Thanks in advance

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      Here you go Shekh https://www.loom.com/share/7b1fb848c30b45a08f96e96c38335cec

      Summary:

      • Header & bi-line are confusing, I would reword them like this

      Get hired for more freelance gigs

      90% of clients hire who to hire based on your reviews.

      • AB Test with different CTA button colors. I think a red would contrast well with the rest of your website and could drive more clicks

      • Hire an English-native copy writer or copy editor to go over this whole landing page. There are many grammar mistakes and confusing sentences.

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        Thanks a lot, @AntCas
        I appreciate your time and effort ❤️

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    Please, check out our Peloton killer, Anthony:

    https://kayo.club

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      Here you go https://www.loom.com/share/2bc6bd7307f64d5eb95fb65b619037dd

      Summary:

      • Photos were too close up, I thought this was just a community not a physical product at first. Get photos (or even better video) of fitness models training with your product.
      • Fix your CTA button, I had to click 3 different buttons just to get to an email form.
      • Testimonials should be higher up.
      • Product screenshots aren't great.
      • Text should contrast better with background for readability.
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        Wow! Great job, thank you!

        Really quick fixes that you suggest can dramatically increase the waitlist conversion. And you found that Sign-up form bug that we've tested thousands of times. Thank you! Will fix and let you know :-)

        By the way, these images you found realistic are actually 3d-renders. So, I'll tell my visualizator that he made a good job.

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    Would love to get some feedback on https://dashlook.app. Out of 200 unique visitors, got zero sign ups, and zero twitter followers. I was thinking, perhaps my messaging may be a bit unclear 🤔

    Thank you! 🙂

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      Here you go Gintas https://www.loom.com/share/d00f62bcb15f471cba9f97adfb7fbd4c

      Summary:

      • Improve contrast between text and background for readability.
      • Simplify bi-line.
      • 200 visitors is not enough. You need more high quality traffic.

      P.S. I did a live redesign of your header, stick to the end of the video for the result.

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        Great tips, thank you very much! 😊

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    Please what do you think about it

    https://tobiadeoye.ga

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      Here you go Tobi https://www.loom.com/share/da969d3a67c34db39b81bda9fd2c56d4

      Summary:

      • Text is too small, hard to read
      • Copy is confusing, has grammar mistakes
      • A personal website should have more focus on projects you've completed, check out https://nathalyn.com/ for a great example
      • The picture of you should be higher definition (or just make the photo smaller so it doesn't look blurry).
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        Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on what you've written

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    http://insiteful.co thank you so much 🙏

    (we're also working on a new one at http://insiteful.co/try)

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      Here you go https://www.loom.com/share/bf8c2978759a48dcae13c809d8f7cd9b

      • Header is not clear
      • Animation is both distracting and hard to read
      • Bi-line text should contrast more with the background
      • CTA that opens a popup can be simplified, just make the CTA an email signup form to begin with
      • More social proof sooner
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        Thank you very much!!

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    Hi Anthony, would love to get your feedback on https://legendsverse.com

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      https://www.loom.com/share/2776c41367a0415fb36f6f8cd951563f

      • Make it clear that your CTA is a buy button
      • Clean up that popup, it's overwhelming
      • Add photos to your testimonials
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        Thanks a lot Anthony will do those changes this week.

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    https://wizwonk.com
    thanks in advance for your feedback

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      https://www.loom.com/share/6587b5c10c874f86b7e6a9b07dae0f00

      • Your copy is too long, cluttered, and could be clearer.
      • CTA has the right idea, but has UI problems. Form field looks more like a button than the actual button (and the hint text is partially hidden).
      • Get rid of elements which distract from your message. ie background image, navigation.
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        Thank you so much. Very valuable advice. Will take it into consideration for sure

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    Platform to teach kids entrepreneurship, through practice:
    https://junior-boss.com

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    Hi Anthony 👋
    We are running an E-commerce Fashion brand. What is your thought on my product template page, please?
    --> https://www.droverclub.com/product/country-kitchen-front-hoodie

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    Hey Anthony, would you like to roast this? https://bukadesk.com/

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    Hey Anthony!

    Perfect, just what I was looking for.

    https://www.revsync.io

    Burn it to the ground!

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    Hi Anthony,

    Please take a stab at Breeze
    https://breeze.bar

    Thanks

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    https://valorize.app
    I wont describe to get your feedback in its purest!

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    Hi would love some roast on here
    https://www.pricewell.io/

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    Vadootv- Video hosting and marketing for creators and businesses https://www.vadoo.tv/

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    Ohhh, this is timely. I just finished a complete do over on our site: https://signalflare.app

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    Hi, can you please give feedback. privateequitylist.com

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    Hi Anthony, would love to hear your feedback on https://writing9.com

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    Hi,
    I'm currently working on a Square29 where we create professionally designed, fast, custom made websites at an unbeatable price.

    It's a new service, landing page is far from completed but some feedback would be awesome. You can check it out at https://www.square29.com

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    Thanks Anthony.
    I built Square Menu https://sqmn.io for helping restaurants to publish menu online and generate QR code for viewing, and allowing them to update the menu easily.
    The best paying customer I currently have is a Omakase restaurant owner who changes menu everyday.
    Would love to hear any feedbacks.
    Thanks!

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    Hi Anthony, please roast my landing page https://duply.co

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    Would love feedback on our video hosting tool https://www.vadoo.tv/ . We compete with Vimeo, Wistia

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    https://upgraded.dev -- would appreciate any feedback!

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    https://metroretro.io/early-access

    Thanks Anthony, this is an announcement & landing page in one!

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    Hey Anthony. It is a really simple landingpage to validate our idea.
    What do you think? https://keepcart.co

    Thank you very much!

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    Reply here or to the Twitter thread and I'll respond with a video roast of your landing page based on first impressions. I'll get to as many as I can today and the rest of this week. If I don't get to you, post in the https://indieworldwide.co/ Slack in our daily #roast-my-landing-page channel.

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      Looks like I've had a lot of replies this evening. Since it's already night where I am I'll do my reviewing in the morning. 🔥

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