Photos were too close up, I thought this was just a community not a physical product at first. Get photos (or even better video) of fitness models training with your product.
Fix your CTA button, I had to click 3 different buttons just to get to an email form.
Testimonials should be higher up.
Product screenshots aren't great.
Text should contrast better with background for readability.
Really quick fixes that you suggest can dramatically increase the waitlist conversion. And you found that Sign-up form bug that we've tested thousands of times. Thank you! Will fix and let you know :-)
By the way, these images you found realistic are actually 3d-renders. So, I'll tell my visualizator that he made a good job.
Would love to get some feedback on https://dashlook.app. Out of 200 unique visitors, got zero sign ups, and zero twitter followers. I was thinking, perhaps my messaging may be a bit unclear 🤔
Thanks Anthony.
I built Square Menu https://sqmn.io for helping restaurants to publish menu online and generate QR code for viewing, and allowing them to update the menu easily.
The best paying customer I currently have is a Omakase restaurant owner who changes menu everyday.
Would love to hear any feedbacks.
Thanks!
Reply here or to the Twitter thread and I'll respond with a video roast of your landing page based on first impressions. I'll get to as many as I can today and the rest of this week. If I don't get to you, post in the https://indieworldwide.co/ Slack in our daily #roast-my-landing-page channel.
Hi Anthony 👋
This is mine: App Support Platform: https://appsupports.co
Hey Stephan, here's my first impressions https://www.loom.com/share/b9e340f012cc418aa48b6c1d3a43916e
Summary:
Thank you very much Anthony🖖
hey, I'm just helping the dev of this page. This app let's you generate thousands of NFT art without coding within minutes https://nft.appsus.co.uk
Here you go David https://www.loom.com/share/cabc8c08695c412a874aef4eb5804fa7
Hey, Thank you so much for the feedback! We really appreciate it! We are now working on the changes. Cheers!
We are launching GrabStar to ProductHunt next week.
https://grabstar.io/
Thanks in advance
Here you go Shekh https://www.loom.com/share/7b1fb848c30b45a08f96e96c38335cec
Summary:
Get hired for more freelance gigs
90% of clients hire who to hire based on your reviews.
AB Test with different CTA button colors. I think a red would contrast well with the rest of your website and could drive more clicks
Hire an English-native copy writer or copy editor to go over this whole landing page. There are many grammar mistakes and confusing sentences.
Thanks a lot, @AntCas
I appreciate your time and effort ❤️
Please, check out our Peloton killer, Anthony:
https://kayo.club
Here you go https://www.loom.com/share/2bc6bd7307f64d5eb95fb65b619037dd
Summary:
Wow! Great job, thank you!
Really quick fixes that you suggest can dramatically increase the waitlist conversion. And you found that Sign-up form bug that we've tested thousands of times. Thank you! Will fix and let you know :-)
By the way, these images you found realistic are actually 3d-renders. So, I'll tell my visualizator that he made a good job.
Would love to get some feedback on https://dashlook.app. Out of 200 unique visitors, got zero sign ups, and zero twitter followers. I was thinking, perhaps my messaging may be a bit unclear 🤔
Thank you! 🙂
Here you go Gintas https://www.loom.com/share/d00f62bcb15f471cba9f97adfb7fbd4c
Summary:
P.S. I did a live redesign of your header, stick to the end of the video for the result.
Great tips, thank you very much! 😊
Please what do you think about it
https://tobiadeoye.ga
Here you go Tobi https://www.loom.com/share/da969d3a67c34db39b81bda9fd2c56d4
Summary:
Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on what you've written
http://insiteful.co thank you so much 🙏
(we're also working on a new one at http://insiteful.co/try)
Here you go https://www.loom.com/share/bf8c2978759a48dcae13c809d8f7cd9b
Thank you very much!!
Hi Anthony, would love to get your feedback on https://legendsverse.com
https://www.loom.com/share/2776c41367a0415fb36f6f8cd951563f
Thanks a lot Anthony will do those changes this week.
https://wizwonk.com
thanks in advance for your feedback
https://www.loom.com/share/6587b5c10c874f86b7e6a9b07dae0f00
Thank you so much. Very valuable advice. Will take it into consideration for sure
Platform to teach kids entrepreneurship, through practice:
https://junior-boss.com
Hi Anthony 👋
We are running an E-commerce Fashion brand. What is your thought on my product template page, please?
--> https://www.droverclub.com/product/country-kitchen-front-hoodie
Hey Anthony, would you like to roast this? https://bukadesk.com/
Hey Anthony!
Perfect, just what I was looking for.
https://www.revsync.io
Burn it to the ground!
Hi Anthony,
Please take a stab at Breeze
https://breeze.bar
Thanks
https://eyescream.devss.io/
https://valorize.app
I wont describe to get your feedback in its purest!
Hi @AntCas - always like a roast: https://paperless.io
Hi would love some roast on here
https://www.pricewell.io/
Vadootv- Video hosting and marketing for creators and businesses https://www.vadoo.tv/
Ohhh, this is timely. I just finished a complete do over on our site: https://signalflare.app
Hi, can you please give feedback. privateequitylist.com
Hi Anthony, would love to hear your feedback on https://writing9.com
Hi,
I'm currently working on a Square29 where we create professionally designed, fast, custom made websites at an unbeatable price.
It's a new service, landing page is far from completed but some feedback would be awesome. You can check it out at https://www.square29.com
Thanks Anthony.
I built Square Menu https://sqmn.io for helping restaurants to publish menu online and generate QR code for viewing, and allowing them to update the menu easily.
The best paying customer I currently have is a Omakase restaurant owner who changes menu everyday.
Would love to hear any feedbacks.
Thanks!
https://panoroo.com
Roast mine!
Hi Anthony, please roast my landing page https://duply.co
Would love feedback on our video hosting tool https://www.vadoo.tv/ . We compete with Vimeo, Wistia
Ok, let's do it!
Hey @AntCas can we get your feedback on https://flowabl.io?
roast mine! Microtask.com
https://upgraded.dev -- would appreciate any feedback!
https://metroretro.io/early-access
Thanks Anthony, this is an announcement & landing page in one!
Hey Anthony. It is a really simple landingpage to validate our idea.
What do you think? https://keepcart.co
Thank you very much!
Reply here or to the Twitter thread and I'll respond with a video roast of your landing page based on first impressions. I'll get to as many as I can today and the rest of this week. If I don't get to you, post in the https://indieworldwide.co/ Slack in our daily #roast-my-landing-page channel.
Looks like I've had a lot of replies this evening. Since it's already night where I am I'll do my reviewing in the morning. 🔥
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