The Perfect Pitch Stack (Over Zoom)

I have 10 minutes with 8 slides, including the front page

I get to choose how much of the 10 minutes goes to QnA at the end

With a team of three, how can I give the perfect presentation without sounding like Steve Jobs?

Because originally I had a 10 page business plan, and then shortened it down to one page Lean Canvas.

Now I`m pondering how I can make my pitch even shorter and more precise without sounding repetitive.pr