Hello,
This is my very first landing page, i've read some really interesting posts here, on IH and I've tried to do a good landing page by myself !
Roast it !
While this page is very good content wise, I feel it's a bit... bland. Lots of white/grey and no animation, the text isn't centered next to the images, there's a header missing above the companies listed, and I think you could frame their logos or make them clickable. Same thing with the offers, only the middle one is framed and has a colorful CTA. Lastly, you can't say your clients love you and show 5 stars if it isn't true. That's what you'll do once you get your first customer feedback ;)
Keep up with the good work, you're almost there!
Hello,
Thx for the feedback :)
I've noted the designs feedbacks and I will fix it !
For the 5 stars, i've done that because we already have like 100 users on the v1 of the product, but the v2 change the product a lot and provide much more value for users...
But the product change a lot so i don't know if it's legitimate show 5 stars...
I would improve the hero animation - make the scrolling smooth. I see it is a recorded screen, which is great as it shows the real product, but at the beginning when you scroll down it doesn't feel good.
Two other minor things:
I would add some small animations to screenshots below - either replace them with some screenshots as well or make them fade in when you scroll down? It's a little bit too static in my opinion.
You list companies without any header. Are they your clients or just companies you like? ;-) Maybe moving "our clients love us" next to it would make it better. I would also try to get some testimonies from them, you show 5 stars but it doesn't mean anything, it's not confirmed by any real user.
While this page is very good content wise, I feel it's a bit... bland. Lots of white/grey and no animation, the text isn't centered next to the images, there's a header missing above the companies listed, and I think you could frame their logos or make them clickable. Same thing with the offers, only the middle one is framed and has a colorful CTA. Lastly, you can't say your clients love you and show 5 stars if it isn't true. That's what you'll do once you get your first customer feedback ;)
Keep up with the good work, you're almost there!
Hello,
Thx for the feedback :)
I've noted the designs feedbacks and I will fix it !
For the 5 stars, i've done that because we already have like 100 users on the v1 of the product, but the v2 change the product a lot and provide much more value for users...
But the product change a lot so i don't know if it's legitimate show 5 stars...
I'm not a designer but I can share my feelings.
I would improve the hero animation - make the scrolling smooth. I see it is a recorded screen, which is great as it shows the real product, but at the beginning when you scroll down it doesn't feel good.
Two other minor things:
Thx for the feedback !
I will change this video for a better one 😅
I've noted other designs feedbacks and I will fix it !