I replied to a post about a week ago regarding submitting your landing page for feedback. Well, after posting my website the feedback came, and to sum it up, the website wasn't "clear" what the product was (b2c page) or how we benefit businesses (b2b page).
So, I spent part of my "free time" the past week to hash out a new design to make both the B2C and B2B landing pages more clear on what we do, what we provide, and our direction.
I know there is a lot I can add to these pages and will over time. I didn't want to spend too much of my time hashing out every detail possible when I can instead be focusing on sales and/or the actual product.
I would love to hear everyone's feedback on the landing pages, and of course the product idea in general. I thank you in advance!
Hi James,
Positives:
Improvements:
Hope this helps.
Thanks for the feedback! I hope to be able to have some time tonight to address it.
The counters are too much, too fast
"It is time to discover new and exciting experiences made just for you"
How about
"Discover exciting experiences you'd love"
I think 'Just Pick Something' is a bit of negative context, but it's better than something non emotional so :shrug:
"With Just Pick Something, it is finally possible to discover unique drinks, flavorful food, and amazing entertainment that won't disappoint."
to
"Memorable unique drinks, flavorful food, and amazing entertainment."
Also the other text, condence it a bit and make it more impactful with emotional terms.
not "useful"
The design is kinda nice, maybe less movement on the balls, as much as the phone moves is more than enough. Should probably test, I bet with no animations is would actually convert better, cause it's a distraction, even if it is nice to look at.
CTA - Download & start discovering, can drop the download& or start discovering today
Thanks for the useful feedback. I am hoping I can get around to it tonight. Also thanks for the follow!