Thanks so much to @austencam, @nathanrodgers, and @frontendor for such great feedback on the first, very poor, version of my landing page. @nathanrodgers even created a Loom video feedback! How amazing is that :).
Here's the new, and hopefully, improved version: https://markfolder.com.
What do you think guys? Does this new landing page make you want to sign up? If not, why not?
By the way, I Julian Shapiro's guide for landing page creation here: https://www.julian.com/guide/growth/landing-pages. Very useful.