V2 Landing page from IH feedback. Trading feedback for feedback.
Hi guys!
I just fixed up my landing page using the feedback I got from Indie Hackers and Pioneer.
Is the hero immediately clear? Does the page flow nicely? Is the design clean? Missing anything that you think I should include?
If you provide me with feedback and a link to your landing page I'll reply with feedback of my own.
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Cool Product and great simple landing page. Its immediately clear to me what the product is about and its benefits. If I have to nit pick I would say that the cards are little smaller in size, but most likely that because I am viewing this on a wide screen monitor. Also curious what the surprised emoji is doing next to No cc required text :)
But overall really perfect LP. Wishing you all success with this product.
Would appreciate if you could share your thoughts on mine.
https://skulogi.com
TIA.
Thanks! The surprised emoji is to draw attention to the line and a little cheeky joke like he's surprised you don't have to put your CC in for a free trial. Makes the page a little more fun.
My thoughts on SKULogi:
1 - Space out the header options a bit, they're cramped
2 - I think you can improve your one-liner. "AI for inventory forecasting, classification, and planning."
3 - Too much text everywhere. Every two sentences you can combine or every sentence you can remove is a win.
4 - Know the Expected Demands for your products in Advance. Get Accurate Sales Forecasts and Plan your Inventory Better. -> I find the highlighting distracting. It's easy to read when you don't capitalize every word. You can trim the paragraph to like 3 short bullets maybe.
5 - Make the Integrations items 3 cards floating off the page
6 - "If you would prefer to directly integrate your system with SKULogi, please let us know. We are building more integrations and would be happy to prioritize your request." -> "Contact us for custom integrations!"
Hopefully, that helps!
Thanks a lot for taking the time to review the site and the detailed feedback.
I need to work on these. For some reason when I was creating it i was thinking I should fill the pages with enough texts, that's the reason why I stretched some of the sentences.But now I know better to keep it short.
Very clean and modern look. The message is very clear.
There are some design improvements that I would suggest:
The purpose section has a disconnect with overall feel of the website. My suggestion is use shadows and small rounded cards as you have used for the features section.
Suggestion for features section, you can use the 4 Slack colors as background colors of the cards to make the features more prominent.
Personally I would prefer an ADD TO SLACK CTA right after the features section.
The pricing section needs more life too. Add some emojis or some design elements to the right and left of the pricing card to make the experience more enjoyable.
Overall, it's a solid landing page. I like how you used emojis to give better context and meaning to the words. Great job.
Have a great new year start, Matt.
Fantastic feedback! Thank you so much, very helpful, I've added every one of your comments to the live website, check it out!
Do you have a website you want me to provide feedback for?
Looks great, Matt. Yeah, I am still figuring out the idea. I'll be sure to have your feedback one day. Let's be a mutual.
Sounds good, let me know!