We have built a landing page to help you every time you don't know where to go for travel🚗 Feedback needed!
Hi there!
I am Louis, currently, our team came out with a new version of the landing page(https://loopit.dev/). We had an idea about making a social platform to help people get their next travel route. We want to get our next trip idea in just one click and without the research because we are all too lazy to do the research for ourselves.
So we made a landing page and a website for this idea(https://loopit.dev/); basically, just send us the place where you have no idea what spots to visit, and we will match a travel route for you! We wanna know what do you guys think about this idea. Check out the landing page and send us some requests! Or you can contact me directly for more info!
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Here you go! https://app.get-lumo.com/v/5543a970-29f0-485c-9948-f9b7f52ff174
Hi @marijnroukens
First of all, thanks for your feedback. Your feedback is super helpful! And the way you give feedback is super cool btw. Our dev team is now working on the problem you had mentioned, which includes the required show after submit, the remind text after submitting disappears too fast. And we did match a route for you and sent it to you, if you didn't receive it let me know. We are looking forward to any feedback about this route or this service! If you like it, feel free to request the service again!
Glad to hear it helped! Always happy to give some feedback. I haven't received an email yet, would love to see the results, we had some trouble with our email server so this could be on our side. Could you send it again? to be sure you can use [email protected] as my email. Sorry for the trouble, would love to see my options in LA! :)
If you like the video format you can also do it yourself at https://get-lumo.com , works great for just about anything communication wise :)
Good luck!
HI @marijnroukens,
Just want to let you know that we have updated our landing page, and this version has made a lot of change base on all the feedback, including yours. Your feedback is super helpful! If you don't mind, I hope you can take a look at this version of Loopit, and again, any feedback is welcome! Not sure where can I find you so I also send out an email, I hope I didn't bother you too much! https://loopit.dev/
We will send it again ASAP! We already prepare a travel route for you to try. If you didn't receive it, just let me know! Thanks again for the feedback! And also our any update will let you know :)
You have started working on a nice site, here are some things I do to change it.
H1, turn the message into what you offer, not what you don't offer. Make the message at the top what your mission or product aim is. I suspect it's something like, Travel planning reimagined?
I would also add a few paragraph explaining what are the major flaws of today planning systems for travelers, and the pain the users are experiencing whilst using them.
Then I would show how your platform does it differently!
Ultimately I would add some quotes from people you spoke to that think you have a good plan/idea and a footer to add some extra trust signals!
Best
Hi @orliesaurus,
Thanks for your feedback! Actually, Headline is really a headache for me, I did try a lot of different combinations of heading, it turns out to be no difference between us and other online travel agencies like Tripadvisor since everyone will say something like explores, experience. We want to focus more on the "effortless" travel idea generate, travel is more about the experience, not planning. I am curious did our heading provide our value correctly?
We will consider adding some more text to create more difference between us and others, by adding more paragraphs or adding social proof. Super appreciate your advice, it helps a lot! Any further feedback or discussion is welcome, and feel free to use our service, too!
Have you considered hiring a copywriter?
Hi @orliesaurus, we are still at our super early stage, we will consider it in the future I guess. Since all of us aren't native speakers, sometimes it's a problem for us to deliver the correct message to the user, I mean like now, I am not 100% sure if you can get what I am saying haha, but we will keep crafting it! Thanks for your feedback and looking forward to more!
Hi @orliesauru,
Just want to let you know that we have updated our landing page, and this version has made a lot of change base on all the feedback, including yours. Your feedback about the heading line is helpful! If you don't mind, I hope you can take a look at this version of Loopit, and again, any feedback is welcome! Not sure where can I find you so I also send out an email, I hope I didn't bother you too much! https://loopit.dev/