What do you think of my landing page? How can I improve it?
Hi, I'm looking to improve my landing page as it does not get a lot of traction at the moment. Feel free to let me know what you think of it and what great feature to add to give clearer impressions to customers. Thanks a lot!
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Hi Eugene,
I'm really sorry, but I simply don't know what you're offering. If I was to guess it was a way to consume news via audio, but it's just not clear.
Even from looking at the pictures I just don't know what the app does.
Your current message is all over the place, with pictures of coffee cups, naked men, cats and books. Mentions of tired eyes, nonsense social media and text-to-speech too.
You need to clearly define what your app does, what problem you're actually solving, and why yours is the best solution. Once you have those things defined, stick to those themes.
I hope this helps, and if you'd like any more feedback/clarification, feel free to ask.
Jon
Understood your comment @WildcardCopy. I thought by referensing to these themes and images, it would somehow paint an abstract use cases to the users - in short, I was trying to make the page catchy.
And yes, you're right. It's a way to consume news using text-to-speech. I should have made that clearer.
Your comments are valuable when I knew that there was something off with the landing page. Got your point and will work on it ASAP. Thank you so much.
Hi @WildcardCopy, I've done some changes to the landing page and would like to ask if you can take a look again. Thank you.
Hi @eugenesergio,
Your new 'How it works' section is a massive improvement. It adds clarity that wasn't there before.
Also, the visual impairment information is a great selling point, potentially your biggest selling point. I'd probably suggest cutting down your H1's to just one, focusing on the visual impairment sentiment.
I think you could still focus your message more, both with your copy and your choice of images, but it's a big step in the right direction!
Jon
@WildcardCopy, just a follow up question, is it ready to be posted in PH or Subreddits? If not, what else does it lack? Thanks again.
Eugene
Hi Eugene,
Maybe the best next step is to share it on Reddit and gather feedback from there before deciding whether to share it on PH?
Jon
Thanks for the kudos and tips @WildcardCopy! Once again I've updated the landing page based off the following video recording and reaction/commentary to the landing page by @koaty. You two have helped me improve the landing page a lot so thanks again:
https://prop.to/D85GI8zvKo/1