What do you think of our landing page/s?
Hey there! I'm Pat O'Connor, the Managing Director at VRAI!
We've just launched VRAI - Data driven VR simulation, and I would love to get some web design feedback
https://www.vraisimulation.com
Any tips/feedback/suggestions would be much appreciated
Happy to hear your thoughts!
Thank you
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Your design is good and you have pretty much all the elements a landing page needs; however I still do not have a clue what your company does.
I completely agree with @boristane here. I don't know what problem you're solving, or why you're the best at solving it.
You may need to tone down the technical jargon, and push the concepts the average Joe will understand.
From what I do understand, I think you'd boil your offering down to something like 'Use VR to improve your training', or similar.
Once you've gotten that broader message across, then you should drill down into the types of training you've done/can do.
In a nutshell, talk more about the benefits, and less about the features. Customers don't care how you did it, they just care about how it will improve their life.
I hope this helps
Jon
It's very niche, what kind of feedback are you after?
There is a lot of dark/black color, while I think of VR as vibrant and fun...what kind of vibe are you after?
Do you have videos to show what the xperience looks like? Maybe include them in the page