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What works and what doesn't about my landing page?

https://pickle.bigbunny.io/

I'm a developer that doesn't do much design or copywriting so I'd like some feedback on this one. Its for a Slack bot I'm building to easily rotate tasks; Pickle.

  • Is the value proposition clear?
  • Does it explain the product?
  • What impression do you have based on the landing page?

Thank you!

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    What task am I assigning?

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      Generally things that tend to recur but aren't usually planned out through the project management software a team uses due to their ad-hoc nature. Being from the software industry, to me this is code reviews, QA passes, hosting a standup, and things like that.

      All of the teams that are using Pickle on a regular basis appear to be software teams using it for those types of tasks, but other industries use Slack as well so I didn't explicitly state its just for code reviews/QA on the landing page.

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        Okay, got it. You may want to niche down to developers, target that audience, learn from them and then expand to other categories. While there can be many use cases, niching down will help you to make your mistakes.

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          Makes sense, thanks

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