What's your one-liner?

I guess this is your project -> https://lipy.cc/wp/

Anyway, the font is not really my taste, it looks a little too old-school for my taste, but that's purely personal.

You also seem to miss the reason why I should use an Interactive language learning solution. You have the what, if you scroll down you have the how, but I don't see any why.

There are multiple ways to address this, one of them is thinking about why you created this solution initially, did you created it for yourself? What didn't you found in an already existing solution?

The tagline from what I see from the website could be something like:

Put a new language on your lips, the fun way!

I hope this helps!

Nice one!

This is a really clever idea, but the one liner doesn’t do it justice. I agree with @LexPaval that the descriptive text further down helped make things click.

I wasn’t clear on the “game” aspect to this at first. Especially because the website doesn’t look very playful.

Perhaps something along the lines of “The social startup leaderboard” (or something like that) would be more descriptive?

Hey! Nice product you have there! The one-liner that you have put there is but a description of your product, while it does describe it a little bit, I feel you have a better nugget in the about page:

What happens to all those cool products and startups after they got listed on Product Hunt? Now you can keep track of your favourite startups and see how they grow on social media after they have launched.

I feel this should be somehow integrated on the landing page, this explains all the questions that I had when I initially stumbled upon your product.

Thanks for sharing!

I only understand backend

I really dig your landing page, and the way it's worded seems to be aimed towards technical people.

Unfortunately, I am not familiar with all the technologies used and therefore I don't understand if it's for me or not, I don't know if your solution is solving my problem.

That could be perfectly fine if I'm not your target audience, just keep in mind that non-technical people could skip your product just because they don't understand what problem you're solving.

I would like to ask you, why did you create this product?

Yep, this explains it! It's a nice niche you have there, you can easily put so many guides on how to set up your LinkedIn profile, how to do cold-reach, and all that.

I wish you luck with your project!

This is such a good idea! I struggled a lot during college with sleep due to to poor sleep hygiene.

You have a fairly descriptive one-liner, that's all fine, but you should try to play around a little with something that calls to action or addresses the reward. Something like:

Take control over your sleep.

Do some A/B testing and see how people respond.

Keep up the good work!

Hey, thanks for sharing! I feel your one-liner is a little bit misleading, or maybe too vague to be useful.

After reading the line, I was expecting to have something related to something with drag-and-drop elements, elementor style thingie.

The product is fine though since it's dedicated to drop landing pages.

So, just use that to give some context:

The last drop landing page tool you'll ever need

You can play more with this and see where you can put it on your landing page.

I like what you have there, keep up the good work!

Certainly not 1, it's way too vague, it doesn't have anything that differentiates you from the rest of the products from the market.

2 is much better, but from what I read about your goal from the project page, you can experiment more, something like:

1 click poll service

Since the purpose is to have something minimalist, with a fast creation process, you can think about what questions are the potential customers asking themselves.

Creating a persona profile for your ideal customer would help you a lot in identifying what they really want to hear.

From looking at your product, I notice you don't really have anything on your landing page, it's cool that you get straight to creating the poll, but I would suggest that you add something about benefits and something else below.

People will be asking why should they use your product even after arriving on your page, so keep that in mind.

This explains it very well, the why in this case is implicit, if people reach you, they know why :D.

Top job!

Hey, I like what you have there, it seems focused enough, what I couldn't find though, is your free plan or even a trial.

You could think about a scenario where I have a SaaS, it's at a very early stage, I make very little money but I want to integrate your solution from the get-go.

I think pricing should be scalable, like businesses, and it should start with free.

It's fine to use this as a description on your landing page, it describes what it does and it's a technical product.

What you could add additionally on your landing page, is the pain-point. What are the current solutions missing? The UX, the UI, why would I use your service?

Also, make sure you include a free pricing option to help with the onboarding of new customers.

This is such a cool idea, I like it. The one-liner feels spot-on!

What I feel there is a little bit of missed opportunity, is that you offer no digital alternative.

A digital version of this could be a good idea, whether you send it physically or digitally, or you could even separate them for different prices.

The only problem that I see with the overall business is, what happens if you're not on the market in 10 years' time? Do you refund people?

I know the feedback is not exactly related to the one-liner, but I hope it helps you on your journey!

Hey, I like your project and your content, top job!

The one-liner that you put here I could not find on your landing page or something and I feel it's rather complicated and vague.

Are the current communities not democratic? Is the building of our current communities not democratic? Why do I want a democratic community building?

You do address most of these on the about page, and I like it.

I feel this one-liner fits better:

Educating you in building a better community.

But in the end, for your type of product, it might not be that important.

But I guess that's how you validate the ideas, you ask the community :D.

So feel free to play around with this.

It's pretty straightforward, what I would add, is something that gives some kind of context or something more specific, something like:

Get the comics you want in your inbox every week!

Or maybe there are random comics, in that case, it could be:

Get brand new comics delivered to your inbox every week!

I hope this helps!

I understood exactly what the product does without even having to click the link, I guess that's the magic of your product.

I like that you addressed on your landing page some of the pressing questions that customers could have, I like that.

What I would suggest that you add, is a free forever plan, make it limited but offer it, as it provides good exposure, people can use it for small launches or something and later there is a potential that they upgrade to your paid plan.

I hope this helps!

I guess this is the website -> https://typestudio.co

I don't think it needs additional tinkering about, it's descriptive enough, the landing page is fun, the free plan is nicely compared with the paid options, the only thing you could add here is to recommend the pro version, but it's cool that the button with a different color attracts the attention there.

All in all, top job!

This is also the only thing on our website (https://listle.io), but not sure if it's enough to get people intrigued and download the mobile app.

Hey man, I like the idea, I don't really know if you can do a better job presenting the landing page using substack, that's why I basically use my personal website as the landing page for now - lexpaval.com

I would suggest writing an article about why your substack exists, the article The current bottleneck of the world hits that, but the title is a little misleading.

Just keep in mind why you started your project, what value you want to provide to the people, and how does life look like after they were touched by your value. (I got a little artistic, here, lol)

I would say you have to work more on your landing page and the one-liner.

To be honest, the first thing that came to my mind when I read the link, was some kind of VPN, the literal meaning of networking, but we can fix that :D.

I would bring the scroll-slides from How it works to the main page.

The video is top-notch though, it starts directly with the problem, that's what you want to portray also in the text, on your landing page.

Here is my take for the one-liner:

Making people know each-other, remotely!

This should give a glimpse of what you do and you can the how down the page.

Well, that can be fixed easily, here is my suggestion:

The last API you will ever need.

Other than that, I believe you did a good job addressing the pain point, mainly that having to deal with multiple APIs can be a real PITA.

The one thing that I believe you should work towards, is having some people's testimonials and some numbers to show how much time/money can people save by using your product, just to make your service more appealing.

Related to pricing, I say here you have a little bit of missed opportunity, while I like that you give a full 30 days trial, I really feel you should give people a free forever plan, limit it to 500 requests or something, but have it there.

Don't underestimate the power of free services, they provide real benefits to your exposure and marketing potential.

While the first screen only offers me the solution, the answer to Why should I care comes at the very first scroll, I feel that is the most important thing on your landing page.

Launching is hard

I love the fact that your landing page has a story format, it addresses the reason behind your project in a meaningful way.

The only thing that I would personally improve, is to bold important ideas from the paragraphs. For example, the questions could be bold.

Readability is the only point I would improve, I really like the rest of the page.

Thumbs up!

Ha, this feels like cheating, but I like it!

What I would improve, is to compare the weekly free newsletter with the daily one.

Have them side by side and tell the people why they should care about that daily one. Stating the obvious should be okay, it would be awesome if you could back that up with some kind of numbers (Ex: Increase your chances to get a job by 600% or something).

While that line is pretty vague, you do a very good job addressing all my questions while I scrolled down the page and I see that as a plus.

I don't feel it adds too much value to the landing page, to be honest.

I feel you should put somehow the problem somewhere on the first screen in a meaningful way.

Or maybe:

Ace your Instagram hashtag game!

From what I read, it gives you the ultimate and only tool that you need for Instagram hashtag management, that's powerful!

People have soo many problems with Instagram hashtags, besides the fact that they don't know what hashtags to put, so you can address this issue head-on.

The struggle-free Instagram hashtag tool for a good night's sleep.

Feel free to play with these ideas and track how customers respond to it.

P.S. I bookmarked your project, I like it :D

Hey, I like your landing page, it's clean and I believe it expresses what the product is really about.

My only gripe is with the one-liner, as a non-native speaker I had to read it 2-3 times to understand it, I believe this can be improved a little.

Trade product feedback with other product builders.

Somehow this small change makes it so much better.

What do you think?

I feel this is not specific enough. Get things done, how, why?

I know you are still building your product, but I guess this is an important part that would differentiate your product from others that want to do the same thing and are free (Google Tasks, Microsoft To-Do).

From the name, I guess the idea was to have a co-pilot in your life, that provides relief from mental concentration regarding tasks, you can put this in words, I don't understand enough about your product to give you an example.

You should present some key features on your landing page at some point and even create an about page that explains why you decided to create this product, what was missing from other products, and so on.

Hey, you have a nice looking website and service!

What I couldn't find on your website, is the why?

Why should I choose privacy-friendly analytics for my website?

Does anybody want that? Who wants that? Is there a trend towards privacy? Where?

It might not be the main idea that started this project, but after some digging, I found something that you can use, here is my proposal:

We make privacy regulations simple and fast.

I guess that would be the main reason to use your service, but maybe I don't understand it that better.

I hope these questions bring some light to your product's marketing strategy!