Which Landing Page Headline? SHOULD YOU TURN YOUR IDEA INTO A BUSINESS...
Hello everyone,
Quick question, which headline do you like better? (see image)
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SHOULD YOU TURN YOUR IDEA INTO A BUSINESS?
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90% OF TECHNOLOGY STARTUPS FAIL
Any thoughts on a better headline?
Context: I am trying to create smart tools that help startups succeed. The first tool will be a report generated from a questionnaire that is evaluated with AI and expert knowledge. It is designed to help a person evaluate the costs of taking their idea to market.
If you are interested or want more context checkout: https://www.bigideas.guru
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#2 by a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG way.
A/B test and I bet you #2 will win. Although could be shortened to "90% of Startups Fail". Also consider putting "Make the 10% ..." just after or just before the button. Something like that to counter any negative vibe. Play with it to see which looks best.
Thanks @rab! I love the "Make the 10% ..." that makes all the difference. It adds FOMO.
I am also trying: "The World's 1st Smart Startup Report" (check out the website if you want to see how it looks). I also added the 90% will fail... underneath.
Thanks again for your help.
I definitely like #1 more. #2 has a more negative vibe which is not the emotion you want people to feel when they first see your site 😄
That is a good point, thanks for the feedback
@wardsandler Do you think any of these sound better?
FIND OUT IF YOU SHOULD TURN YOUR IDEA INTO A BUSINESS?
SHOULD YOU TURN YOUR IDEA INTO A BUSINESS?
WANT TO TURN YOUR IDEA INTO A BUSINESS?
I like "SHOULD YOU TURN YOUR IDEA INTO A BUSINESS?" still
Great, Thanks.