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Would like some copywriting feedback for a tag line to my first saas project

Hey all :) I’m launching my saas for private beta next week.
I could use some feedback on what tagline to go for. Either if you like one of mine (attached poll), or if you have any better ideas?

So the tool, it’s a tool where the user can upload a list of websites and get back pre-verified emails and contact forms. Web-based only, no chrome extension.
It would be used by SEOs/marketers for doing outreach to the different websites.

Contact forms specifically are not so easy to find at bulk, and they have a much higher success rate than email-email outreach since contact forms are not as spammed.

Some competitors are hunter.io, findthatlead.com, rocketreach.co, anymailfinder.com.

Here are the ideas I have so far:
  1. Massive outreach made simple. Instantly
  2. Massive scale outreach at lightning speed
  3. Massive outreach made simple
  4. Find the contact details to any business website in seconds
  5. Lets marketers upload lists of websites and get pre-verified emails & contact forms back
  6. Get businesses contact information served on a silver plate
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    I would suggest shortening it to:

    See contact details for any business website in seconds

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