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🚀 Would love to hear your thoughts

Hi people,

I'm putting the finishing touches on the landing page to get tournext.co off the ground, and I'd love a fresh look on it before I start getting my hands dirty.

Would you take a minute to share your feedback?

Thanks a lot!

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    I like the design. I like the curves it has between sections. The only thing you might wanna check out is the contrast ratio between text and background colors. Chrome devtools has an option for that (tutorial: https://webaim.org/articles/contrast/devtools). Furthermore, I like vivid colors more but I guess that's personal. Nice job!

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    Although I'm not 100% fan of the catchline.

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    Hey folks,

    Thanks for the feedback! I've updated the design with your ideas, do the value proposal and the target stand out a little more?

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    Cool idea. The overall design looks nice.

    Some quick feedback

    1. Since this is invite-only, I assume gathering emails is the top goal? I would move that to the top to make it a more prominent CTA
    2. Target some of the copy to your audience. You can mention them directly i.e "Musicians" or "Bands". Speak about the pain point in their words "selling tickets" and "Reaching out to fans" vs "Marketing".
    3. I assume they're not technical so minor adjustments like "Get your custom url" -> "Create your website".

    Keep going :)

    -Akhil

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      Very true! Cheers, I'll do some adjustments :)

      Invite only => yes we're building our community for now, actually the top CTA will just scroll down to the bottom form (don't know if it makes sense)?

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    Hi @michelvermeulen!

    Maybe in the first section the value proposal is not that clear. From the features you list there I'm not entirely sure what problem you are trying to solve.

    Otherwise, looks great!

    Best,
    Dylan

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      Thanks @dcastm

      Gotcha. It's very market specific (bands and solo performers), but I'll work around the hero to make it clearer. Thanks :)

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