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Would you try the free consultation?

Hi!

First post, starting my own side hustle creating financial plans for individuals.

I have just made the first attempt at my website.

Love to hear your feedback on how it could be improved!

https://eudaimoneya.carrd.co/

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    If you create financial plans, why don't you just write that?
    Instead you talk a lot about dreamy stuff.
    If I were you I would structure the page like this

    • What you do
    • What you give the customer
    • Who you've helped
    • What's the biggest challenge your customers face
    • How you solve that challenge
    • Call to action to schedule a call with you
    • More examples of people you've helped
    • Another call to action with a different angle
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