December 24, 2019

Updated website copy & landing page

Jordan Brown @designacademy

Hey posted a few days ago, received feedback and changed the website / upgraded as instructed.

few problems were:

  1. lack of explaining the application use
  2. what is the target audience
  3. non-ssl website
  4. readability issues
  5. non-proper cta button

Still facing the lack of email subscriptions issues. Only received 6 email subscriptions even though I had hundreds of unique viewers.

My goal is to help consumers navigate the jam-packed industry of restaurants and decide what is the best food/value for their money.

Question: Is my homepage product / app intention clear? Is it simply the lack of interest from people?

Still planning to launch in January with or without a lot of email list subscribers. If it does not pick up traction post-launch, I will mark it off as a portfolio project and move on.

Hope I could get some more feedback.

website: http://www.eatradar.com

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    Wow this is sooooooo much better than my current in-progress landing page
    😂. Good job.

    My first comment, being a bit of a grammar nerd, would be to change the copy: "Find restaurant menus quick and easy" to "Find restaurant menus quickly and easily".

    The grammar makes the page come off a bit unprofessional, and would make me less likely to take it seriously as a product.

    I would also replace "Pricing" with "Sign Up" or something that invites the user to join instead of bringing up pricing immediately, especially since the main product is free.

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      Thank you for the feedback :) I appreciate it.

      I updated the grammar.
      Also, I changed "get notified" to "sign up" instead.

      Having the Pricing tab is there mainly because I see it's a scheme that other businesses do. They present the pricing button immediately but it displays both the free and pro options there.

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    I can easily understand what your product does. It helps to find a menu of the restaurants.

    Feedbacks:

    1. The "Home" button is not visible in the first section. Either you remove it or move the image slightly
    2. I almost missed the arrow on the features page
    3. Footer is missing. Looks incomplete website
    4. Add favicon if possible (Not a deal-breaker)
    5. Locations button on the top menu is not working for me.
    6. A small text change (https://monosnap.com/file/26a4YXd78FyHfAcdJ9GJPhlSvY6sUN)

    I hope this helps 😊

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      Thank you for the feedback. It really does help :)
      Fixed some and I will work on adding the rest.

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