Help: Need Feedback on a Landing Page for a New Venture

The response above covered a lot of what I was thinking. Overall I would just say that it lacks a lot of essential details.

When you say documentation it's unclear if you mean documenting the codebase in general or just document related to training.

If you just mean documentation in general then that sounds like a somewhat separate product from new dev training, though I could see how they're related.

And yeah they probably already have their own dev training / documentation stuff right now and you're going to need to give them a good reason to even spend their time considering this website. Some interactive demo or immediate display of value might be useful.

A few thoughts off the top of my head:

1. The pitch seems very vague. I sort of get what the product is, but don't know why I should care.
2. Specific examples could be helpful for visitors to envision how it would be used.
3. How are these modules created? Is it like Gitbook, or videos, or screencasts, or a learning management system, or what?
4. Say I'm the business owner or CTO and I like the idea and want a better way to train my employees and new hires and consultants, etc. But I already have soooo many tools and apps we are using and maintaining. How does Dev Drill help me develop the training modules, not take up a lot of my time, stay up-to-date, and provide something different I don't already get from our other tools, like Basecamp, Github, etc.