Working on my Marketing Prose
Working on my 2018 landing page (and original copy I never used) for my entertainment media startup revolving around loyalty rewards, deals (games, movies, tech, toys only), and curated search + recommendations.
Any feedback appreciated... thx in advance.
- Version 01 (artsy approach)
Headline: A Tasty Experience
Copy: At Taste Buff we want to make sure your search for entertainment is all substance no fat. Join us, your boredom craves it.
Headline: The Connoisseur In You
Copy: Join a community of other connoisseurs like yourself to find entertainment that fits your tastes with personal, and curated recommendations.
Headline: Giveaways. Rewards. Deals.
Copy: Being a Taste Connoisseur is more than just some fancy title. You'll be part of the club, the club that likes to save on good deals and win big. We'll be holding our first giveaway event this spring for a Nintendo Switch. Switch to Taste Buff, we know you Nin-ten-do!
Still not Convinced? Watch how Taste Buff works.
(how it works video)
- Version 02 (straight forward approach)
Headline: The entertainment rewards platform for you.
Copy: "People spend billions of dollars every year on entertainment like movies, and video games. Never knowing they could earn money on their purchases."
Headline: Don't leave money on the table.
Copy: "Taste Buff handles earning rewards and money-back on your movie, games, and DLC (downloadable content) purchases."
Headline: Quick setup continue with your daily purchases.
Copy: "You purchase a product from a vendor link(Amazon, GameStop, Best Buy, etc.), we check your receipt, and you earn points for the purchase."
Headline: Money or Gifts, it's your choice.
Copy: "Convert your points into real cash, discounted subscriptions*, or grab a gift card of your choice from stores like Amazon, PlayStation Store, just to name a few."
Still not Convinced? Watch how Taste Buff works.
(how it works video)
