Critique and Feedback on Landing Page: Tholana Network Management for Founders and Startups

Hi all, I've been along time lurker at indie hackers and decided it was time to take the plunge and join this great community.

I've been working on putting together an MVP for our networking tool Tholana. It's a problem that I've faced which is keeping track of my professional contacts, making sure it hasn't been years since last contact and leveraging that to provide value to other in any way possible.

Tholana is sort of a relational database with a smart secretary on top for your professional network and can be used to track clients and potential clients, investors if you're going through a fundraising process or just people you know in a professional manner.

I'm very close to launching an MVP and wanted to get some feedback on the landing page. Any feedback on the page, idea or if you'd like more information on how it works, would be appreciated. Thanks!

The link is www.tholana.com