Please give me feedback on new website design [2nd attempt]

Hi there,
Your custom illustrations give a distinct touch to your design, I think it works great.
My first impression was that it was too much content and slightly bulky - I think your page would benefit from being lighter.

Some ideas for fixes:

• More padding and white space
• Slightly smaller illustrations
• Less text // that's not design but content, but I thought this might help.
• More visual rhythm between the different sections (alternate background color, etc.)
  Good luck!

My feedback on the design is that you have to be careful when asking for feedback on design. You'll get a never ending list of suggestions. People love talking about it.

If you want to see how various designs actually perform you can just make a couple of different landing pages and see which ones people respond to better.

good luck

Hi,
The landing page looks clean but I think there is too much white space. I am pretty sure others might have mentioned the same.
Possible places to add color: Dividers (alternate), Feature Icons, Edition Boxes, Buttons.

Also, only keep a maximum of 6 features on the landing page and add rest on the feature page.

Description: If possible, shorten the description and highlight strong keywords because most people will do a quick glance and will not read the entire content. You have about 3secs to catch someones attention. (I am personally struggling in this for my landing page)

Great job with the illustrations, I'm doing illustrations on my landing page as well. I'll be posting the same question for my landing on Tuesday 9/4.

Hope this helps! Good Luck!

How did you choose your two colors? (the brown orange) and why?

Overall, a good site. I had a quick glance at the existing design (https://www.fileago.com/) and can see how this new design is a major improvement.

When first visiting the site, it reminded me of online will writing services, such as https://farewill.com/. I think it may just be the fonts though.

I feel the CTA button on the top right needs some colour, it blends in too well with the rest of the nav.

The coupon code section, while a great idea, doesn't really catch my attention as well as it should do.

The footer looks a bit plain and boring, mainly due to fonts and padding. A lot of modern websites have a lot of padding on their footers to really space them out. It might be worth taking a read of https://www.awwwards.com/15-excellent-creative-website-footers.html.

I'll revisit this if I get some more time :) I do think it's a great direction to be heading in!

I think you should overlay your text/CTA over the image (also, does this hero image convey what your company is trying to achieve?). If I view this on a laptop I see mostly whitespace and it makes it less engaging (you literally have a few seconds to captivate someone or they'll close your tab).

Also, your logo in the top left corner is a little low res and blurry. It's important to have high quality assets as it's the first impression someone will have of your service and impacts trust.

Your coupon offer below the fold needs a little more breathing space, I'd say bump up the padding.

Your icons above the titles should be centered as the titles should be too, will give it a little more natural flow. Actually, you might not even need the icons as you images (which are lovely, by the way) are communicating the same thing.

Also, your grid of features is a little overbearing. On a laptop I have to scroll a lot to go through them. It would be nice to compact these into a more consumable bullet list of just focus on your top features with a link to the others (like how Slack does it https://slack.com/).

You should horizontally align your CTA section at the bottom. Also make the CTA buttons red like the top of the page and make the stand out from everything else.

Finally, why is your mock up screen in a Comic Sans like font? It's a little distracting and makes it look like it's targeted at a different audience.

Otherwise it's good. It's hard to adjust these things using CSS as it's a lot of trial and error. I use Sketch to mock up things to save me time tweaking CSS later.

Good luck with it!

I like the graphics very much - what did you use for creating/getting them?

1. This product came to mind - https://www.samepage.io/
2. I like the layout but I think adding more colour would make it stand out more.
3. Animation as you scroll down would make it more interesting. This library is very easy to use and works well https://michalsnik.github.io/aos/ Just be careful not to use it any important content that you want indexed as it affects SEO (because the elements are hidden on page load)

Hope that helps!

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