Need feedback on my pre-launch landing page
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I have been working on this landing page for a product I have been thinking of creating for a while. My thought was to create a landing page explaining the product and then see if I can get someone interested in the product before I actually start to build the actual product, so I waste as little time as possible.
But I'm starting to go blind on my own page, any feedback would be welcome!
But what I'm wondering the most, is it clear what the product will be once it is created?
Thanks
As a potential user, I think your landing page would grab my attention more if the top header text was:
"Never miss an important moment in the stocks you care about"
This answers the "why should I keep reading" question.
And after you have grabbed my attention with that, you can tell me the "what" -- Stock Alerts.
The pieces are there, good luck.