Copywriting Analysis: Abinaya from Remote Leaf
by Alexander KlugeI analyzed Remote Leaf’s sales copy on their mobile website using my iPhone X, and I optimized it for higher conversion.
It’s the result of 18 hours of work. You can read it in two minutes.
https://copywritingexamples.com/remoteleaf/express
Remote Leaf is a single person (Abinaya) who aggregates remote jobs from online job boards and career-related websites. It’s manual work.
The business goal of Remote Leaf: Abinaya wants you to subscribe to her online service ($14/mo, $60/6 mo, $100/yr).
Learn to write copy that sells if you’re a voiceover professional, a VO-related service provider, or an independent creator.
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Thanks Alex. I'm wondering if you have any feedback about the new tag/pitch lines that I'm working on.
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You’re welcome, Abi. You can see the best tagline that I could come up with in my recent copy analysis of your page: https://copywritingexamples.com/remoteleaf - I’ve said everything there that I know.
Please keep in mind that having a proper conversation about your market and with your market is crucial to really reflect in your copy what they’re feeling and thinking – so they’re feeling heard. Everything is else is just stumbling in the dark. And I’m talking about questions that go beyond „asking for feedback on a tagline”. There are some real existing desires/needs worth exploring, including things that people will not want to discuss publicly.
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That makes sense. Thanks again.
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