Momentum is awesome
by nakurai codesOkay, I have my prototype, now what?
I need a landing page. I picked Carrd (https://carrd.co) for that. They are super cheap and let me use my custom domain.
My problem is that I am not a designer. My prototype works but it is ugly. Only I can understand my landing page because I know the project. I will need to somehow fix that before flooding the internet with the link to get early access emails.
In the meantime, here is the link to request an early access to the ugly beta https://gentlefi.com
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Hi, I really like this business idea! Simple and effective. landing pages are crucial for a customer facing business. It’s their first impression to your products story or purpose. The purpose of a landing page is to have a Call to Action and convert. Yours is for customers to gain access to beta trails. That’s great and you have that. id suggest 2 things. First, try to make the color of your text the same color as your logo. You want consistency. And second for the CTA button, give it more color contrast.
Anything else on a landing page is the cherry on top. You have great info but it doesn’t seem organized . I’d suggest organizing and defining the sections more, like “why customer needs your Gentle Fi”, “features”, and “pricing”. You don’t need to spell it out. Your design (colors, spacing, text, and graphics ) can help define sections.
Happy to talk more if you want. Not selling anything, just happy to explain my suggestions more. Let me know.
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Hello! Thank you so much for your advice! I made quite a few changes to the page according to your feedback. Could you tell me if it fits what you were talking about?
I am still working on the wording for the "why" section, but hopefully there is more context there.
Of course I'd be happy to talk about it if you have more feedback to provide!
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I really like the changes you made. It flows really well!
A little change I would make, the "Request Access to the Beta!" font color should match the white logo.
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Done! I hadn't even realized I had two different colours there, thank you for catching it. And I am glad you like the new design, I am quite happy with it as well. There still are improvements to be made but I will start sharing it around.
If you know anybody who could benefit from the service, please send them my way!
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