Landing page redesign, what do you think?

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Thanks!

Hi! It seems that the web site is down! What happen?

Nice! Is your demo template from creative-tim?
https://demos.creative-tim.com/argon-design-system/examples/landing.html

what did you use to create the landing page? A template?

Wonderful design! Which tool did you use to make these shapes and bubbles?

I guess, a demo video instead of a screenshot would made it even more clear.

The design is great! I also agree with @volkandkaya you should definitely put more screen shots of what it looks like.

Also make the email capture bigger, with a stronger CTA. Something like get notified when we launch. (P.S. early adopters get special pricing/features). This will allow you to have a bigger list to market too when you are ready to do a full launch.

Hi, the text on the little window with an open website is a bit small for my test, but the rest is just perfect. No kidding.

Love the design. Very easy to read and easy on the eye. Love it!

Looks good.

For the landing page I recommend showing screenshots of the actual web app such as pricing pages, login screens and user permissions.

Also I would remove the idea of you handling the marketing site for them.

Have them host the web app on app.example.com and recommend they use something else to build the marketing site.

I may be biased because I run a marketing site builder, but unless the SaaS app requires the marketing site and web app to be connected I wouldn't recommend it.

I have done it before and to make changes you have to push code to the master branch for no reason, and if you grow and hire non-technical people they can't change the marketing site.