Updated Landing Page & Logo!
by Alex ShyeLast month, I shared v1 of the landing page and got a ton of awesome feedback. So a big hearty thank you to everyone that took the time to provide their thoughts and recommendations!
I've incorporated a bunch of the suggestions:
- Stopped convincing people to journal. I'm now targeting people who already want to journal. If visitors don't want to journal, I don't expect to convert them with this landing page.
- Focus on benefits. My original copy focused on features and what they did. I tried to focus more on user benefits this time.
- New font. I found a few paid ones I really liked but will save those for a later. For now, I like this one off Google Fonts
- New logo. Several people said it was a boring logo and I totally agreed. I like this one better, but still need to think about it.
- Removed quotes about why journaling is great. I had a bunch of quotes from famous people but realized there may be issues with using them. Plus, people who already journal don't need to be convinced
- Added a new section about templates. I'm almost done with this feature, have been using it myself, and have found it super useful.
Again, open to all feedback and suggestions:
- Can you tell what Minute is?
- Who it might be for?
- What benefit and features it has?
- If you journal regularly, or want to journal, what does and doesn't resonate?
- If you're into design, what do you think of the visual design? Font? Logo?
The new version is live:
