#landing-page-feedback
#landing-page-feedback
Spendlight is a weekly spending journal that helps people become better spenders. Features stupid-simple SMS input along the lines of "34@Target #debit #good" and common sense collaboration with your spending partner (a spouse in my case). The images and design are still a WIP, but I'd love to hear comments on the copywriting.
The immediate message is a bit condescendingly - you have a problem and I'm here to fix it.
"If you have trouble sticking to a budget or just want to stop spending too much money, I'm building a tool precisely for you."
I think you need to make it more relatable, something like "We needed help to stick to a budget and get our spending under control. Here's how."
(I would try a LOT of variants of that message on people)