Looking for feedback on my new landing page (first ever real launch)
Looking for feedback on my new landing page (first ever real launch)
Hello,
I finally finished rebranding of SaaS boilerplate (former SaaS Idea) and now the same codebase is called www.caravelkit.com
Can you please look at it and see what I should improve right now?
(I know there is a ton of things to improve but I don't know which one I have to fix first :)
Thanks a lot!!
PS Btw it's my first ever real launch! I created a lot of projects but I didn't launch one of them - this guy is completely different, it's alive!
Hi @Zencentric - well done for launching!!!
I like the question headings - what is it, why choose it, who's it for - good work there, it's nice and clear! (is there a typo in the How it works section - 'dabase' I'm guessing should be database?)
I don't like your hero image. I get the nautical tie-in with the Caravel name, but it doesn't really match your offering and the ms paint ship looks weird...I think a nice clean vector to the right of your headline with a solid color background would work better, or even a stock image related to tech: https://www.pexels.com/search/computer/
And for your logo I'd go with something flatter in white: https://www.flaticon.com/free-icon/paper-boat_1440165
Sorry I know these are just minor design things, I'm not a dev so I'm not your target customer. It would be cool to have an idea of what I could build with Caravelkit...maybe a section showing examples?
Your headline: SaaS application development kit...it's fine, it does what it says on the tin, but it's not exactly sexy...maybe: The Easy Way To Kickstart Your SAAS or Everything You Need To Start Your SAAS
Like I said, all minor things...the main thing is you launched man...awesome job!!
Hi!
Thanks a lot for your feedback!
"dabase" is definitely "database", thanks for catching :)))
What do you mean by "ms paint ship"?
What do you mean by "ms paint ship"?
Sorry, I just meant the ship that was drawn on...this: https://imgur.com/a/gLnqyqK
It looks crap. I get why it's there, but I don't think everyone will get it and I don't think it looks professional...if you went with something more abstract like:
https://www.drawkit.io/illustrations/server-woman-monochrome
It might work better :-)
I feel bad now dude :-) Honestly, there's a lot to like about your site and your idea...I hope you smash it!
Haha no problem :))) trust me it's much better than just stupid and boring "your page looks nice!" so no worries :))))