Hey everyone!
I'm on my 10th iteration on my landing page (https://tellspin.app/). I've tried all sorts of combinations of text. Some things I've tried:
Nothing seems to move the needle much.
Hoping for some honest feedback here, thanks!
The page's font are a bit too big to be easily read other than that, I totally get what the tool does and I think it's genius! I always wondered what happens when people cycle in and out of teams on Slack...well I am glad you answered that for me today!
Are you A/B testing at all? Looking at all the data will be more informative than my personal opinion, however I'll also give my feedback:
Pros:
Cons:
Nits:
Not sure if you've seen this post but it probably says everything better than I can: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/looking-back-to-2020-these-are-5-landing-page-mistakes-indie-hackers-keep-doing-over-and-over-10e6d30f7a
Anyway, overall looks good. Good luck!
Thank you for the in-depth feedback.
Good call on the "increase response times", I switched it to "improve". I'll iterate again on the text sections, I was thinking the same thing, that they weren't to the point as much as I'd like
I really appreciate your write up.
good