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Need #landing-page-feedback to revamp www.coworkinghandbook.com

by Ramon Suarez

Need #landing-page-feedback to revamp https://www.coworkinghandbook.com

Ramon Suarez's avatarRamon Suarez
on December 4, 2018
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    Quite a lot of text in the section "Do you want to know how coworking spaces reach success?" - can this be reduced by using icons and short summary text? I personally would not read all that if browsing the page and would probably leave the site.

    fasicle's avatar fasicle
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    8 years ago
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      Thanks @fasicle

      Ramon Suarez's avatar Ramon Suarez
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    Hi! First of all! What your business landing page is about?
    However, I would appreciate using a grid in the second section;

    • I mean a picture in the left and the description in the right with a button.
    • Or putting the paragraph in the center, leaving some space in left and right.
    ulrichgero's avatar ulrichgero
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    8 years ago
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      Thanks @ulrichgero .

      The landing page's purpose is to sell books on Amazon.

      About the second section, you mean the reviews?

      Ramon Suarez's avatar Ramon Suarez
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      8 years ago
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        • So you can use the product and some words with a Call To Action; as you did in the HERO but with a white background.
        • Yes.
        ulrichgero's avatar ulrichgero
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        8 years ago
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