So- I've never built a landing page before.
So- I've never built a landing page before. This is V1 and I would love feedback from my fellow Hackers before finishing it and going live.
https://unstuck-go-landing-page.webflow.io/
UnstuckGo is a consultancy that aims to help both start-ups and more established businesses in four areas:
-Generating warm leads for their existing business
-Developing pitches and honing client-approach strategies
-Identifying new use-cases and markets, helping companies pivot or diversify
Helping small companies with asymmetric growth strategies.
Elevator Pitch: UnstuckGo helps you find high-value clients, hone its voice, and maximise the market potential of your product.
There will also be elements of the team focussed on gov. affairs and comms consulting.
Any feedback welcome my dudes!
#landing-page-feedback
Overall the look is pretty jarring. I would try to tone down the contrast.
There is also quite a bit of content there. I would try to compress it for people like me that drift off somewhere on the second page. I know there are lots of examples of those long pitch pages out there, but you may at least want to put a call to action in the middle for those with short attention spans.
Thanks for feedback, mega useful! I went for strong colours thinking it would make the site attention grabbing, but jarring certainly isn't what I would be aiming for! Softer colours? Or do you think that I should standardise it all and go for a simple black/white/red theme?
Noted about the amount of content, and call-to-action. It's hard to know what kind of CTA to put, as it is about procuring consulting/strategic services. Would it be a simple contact us button?
Could I ask, with the content- does it make sense at all?
Thanks for your help!
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I was! Now live at www.unstuckgo.com
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Thanks, that's great feedback. On the copy, is it clear what the services are? It felt difficult trying to engage interest in a service which, when working within companies I know has proved valuable to them, but is sometimes difficult to explain the value of as an outside consultant.
Love the Twain quote by the way, and utterly true- the copy was the part I have spent the least time on by far!