Hi IH'ers! I just wrote the last copy for my landing page for this new product I'm launching.
Hi IH'ers!
I just wrote the last copy for my landing page for this new product I'm launching. The weakest part of my landing-page-game is definitely my copywriting where I think that I often try to cram in too much content in my sentences.
So overall I would like your critique on the following:
- Copy (does it make sense? Where could I improve?)
- Design (does it "work"? Is there something to improve?)
Thank you so much!
#landing-page-feedback
Hey Casper,
I like the landing page, but there is lots to improve IMHO.
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Lol
Agree with you that you have too much copy and words. What I usually do is to ask myself, If for each word I have to pay 100$, which would I remove.
Maybe something like this:
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Hope that helps
yea I have to play around with it more for sure, I like your suggestion!
This is awesome. Tailwind has already levelled up my design capabilities massively. I would probably pay for some extra resources if it helps me achieve a professional looking design.
One thing I would love to see is some examples of what I can do with your resources. Or just give away a small set of them for free as a preview. Currently it's a bit vague what the actual resources are, what do they look like?
You are absolutely right, I think the issue right now is that I am producing the resources, but I also want to get some subscribers for my newsletter so that it’s ready when I launch, but without content it’s hard I guess 🤔
Maybe it’s better to wait until I have some content ready to launch with, and then do a push with some free content to build a following?
Thanks for your feedback!
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