I would love to get some feedback on my landing page, after I made some changes based on friendly suggestions.
https://www.targ.cash
I would love to get some feedback on my landing page, after I made some changes based on friendly suggestions.
I would love to get some feedback on my landing page, after I made some changes based on friendly suggestions.
Looks great. I think there's a slight confusion between the brand name "CashTarg" and the domain name "targ.cash".
This inversion seems needlessly confusing.
'Not sure if it's too late, but I would consider bringing the brand in-line with the domain and calling it TargCash.
Thanks for taking your time to give me this feedback
It is something I have noticed too, I would work on the branding because the domain seems contradicting.
But what do you think about the product?
My main concern when looking at a product like this is: "what advantage does it have over the established players?" Is it easier to use? Do the invoices look nice? Is it easier to pay for my clients? And -- is the fee lower for me?
I'd figure out what your ideal customer cares about the most and then really emphasize that point. So, if it's a low fee, say "The lowest fee invoicing app." And then state the fee. However, if it's how easy it is to use, your current headline works well.
However, if ease of use is really your main selling point, I'd want to see an example of how easy it is. So, a quick video or a demo would help in that case.
Otherwise, looks great. I got a good feeling from going to the site and if the currency was in dollars, I would've been more likely to explore it more.
Good day,
I am promoting the ease of use and setting up especially for small businesses that cannot afford to operate a domiciliary account.
CashTarg is promoting the fact that it was built with freelancers/small businesses in mind.
CashTarg is more targeted towards African businesses than it is for businesses outside Africa. That's why the currency isn't in dollars.
CashTarg is also promoting a more secured payment process for the buyer and the seller so as to reduce the rate of fraud in the African market
CashTarg is also focusing on providing a more affordable pricing plan for a better and easier experience.
The product dashboard is still under development so I am not able to make a quick demo, but I can guarantee that once I have passed a certain stage on it's development I would definitely make a demo and post it on the landing page.
I like the idea and the site, the value proposition is clear but what I don’t understand is how the customer is paying those invoices? Do you collect and send the money to my account? Or do I have to connect a payment gateway?
Thanks for taking your time to comment.
I would definitely add more page that describe alot about the product once the product is ready.
The product is still under development though.
Good day,
To answer your question, the process is you generate a payment link(invoice) and it gets sent to your customer for payment. When a customer makes the payment , the money is debited from them and is added to your CashTarg wallet which you can always withdraw after 24hrs.
Please Note: we integrated multiple payment gateway and we decide on which to use based on the current location of that customer.
Probably you should add more info about who you are. You don’t have an about page.
Also, probably you should add more docs about the withdrawal process. You are expecting people to trust you with their money
When viewing on desktop (so the graphic of the guy at the desk is visible), the email box and Create Account button are just off the page. This is a pretty important call to action, you might want to have it higher up so it's visible without scrolling down
Edit: I'm on a 2014 macbook pro, and I do have my text enlarged via system preferences. If I put it back to normal the box is visible, but only if I have my window filling the screen. Might still be a good idea to move those boxes and the blurb above it up.
Based on the website design, I decided to rather add the Sign up button in many places which automatically takes you to the form directly
Site looks nice and it's easy to read through...one question though...cashtarg.com is available, why are you using targ.cash?
Oh, I bought this domain a long time back when I was trying to be unique.
I can't believe that domain is actually free, I would purchase it really soon.
What do you think of the idea?
I'm not your target customer but the idea sounds valid - is accepting different currencies a problem for small businesses/freelancers?
In the pricing section I would make your heading 'Small Business/Freelancers' and put the transaction details in the smaller text below.
Also, that section at the end:
'As much as CashTarg make things really easy for you, we are also building our systems using standard security measures. Want to know how we did this?'
Does this matter enough to potential customers to have it on your front page?
Amazing suggestions, something I would definitely look into.
CashTarg is actually for businesses in Africa, I may not have stated it but the product is for Africans.
It's more of an Invoice generating tool for small businesses and freelancers. So they get to automate their process, sell their products/services to customers from across the world without stressing on how they would get paid.
Currently the most popular we have is Western Union and Transfer Wise. These services charge higher than ours, they still require you going to pick up your funds, they don't provide you with analytics to understand your business growth and they are quite stressful for your clients/customers to make payment with.
And yes I think that ending part matters since the product has to do with people's money.