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Hi everyone, hope you have an amazing start in 2019! 👋

by Martin Mihaylov

Hi everyone, hope you have an amazing start in 2019! 👋

I've already posted the landing page of https://www.clearminute.com once more than one year ago. Since then, the landing page has gone through a complete re-design and we're starting to actively invite users to the beta so I would appreciate to hear your feedback again!

Unfortunately, still haven't had a chance to create a product video which would usually lead to better conversation rate. On the plus side, we've started a blog where we're going to explain more of the values we believe in and how to effectively use the service.

Thanks for your time! 😊

#landing-page-feedback

Martin Mihaylov's avatarMartin Mihaylov
on January 1, 2019
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    Hi Martin, happy new year! here is my feedback:

    • using desktop to view
    • the first line is great "Unlock the full potential of your 24 hours", talking about a problem I can relate to immediately. Next two sentences are also very clear
    • after the image the page gets quite text heavy, to the point there I would only skim the titles. On this note, can the titles be more descriptive? If you check out the Hubspot page (https://www.hubspot.com/products/marketing) in the second section, their titles are fairly descriptive
    • personal preference but I don't like reading text that is too wide, for example in your "High Privacy and Security" section, can you reduce the width to the same size as the other sections? Maybe add an image to the side of it?
    • in short, the landing page is good, I would just redesign the "Features" section to make it more exciting, have a look at other sites and maybe just copy their designs, for example you could take some ideas from Unbounce who do it well (https://unbounce.com/product-overview/landing-pages/), they've designed it so that it never feels like I'm reading too much text. This might be including more images of the product next to the text, logos of companies who are using it, graphics to support the text etc.

    Let me know if you have any questions.

    fasicle's avatar fasicle
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      Thanks for the valuable input, Dom! Your feedback makes a lot of sense and I will definitely​ work on more descriptive titles and reduction of text density.

      Martin Mihaylov's avatar Martin Mihaylov
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      8 years ago
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    Hi,
    first of all, I love the copy of the first 2 sentences. You stated a problem that I resonate with.... but I couldn't see in the rest of your landing page anything that "proved" me that you can deliver.

    I do not want to sound pessimistic, quite the opposite. I think you did what is most difficult, talk about a problem people care. You just need to think how to show and not tell that you are the solution for this problem.

    Fredguth's avatar Fredguth
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    8 years ago
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