Hey there 👋
i'm redesigning the landing page for observely - your all-in-one competitor analysis tool and would love to get feedback on it!
I focused on more information and simple illustrations in the new version. Also the pricing is now prominently placed on the new landing page.
It's live at https://observely.net/ . Every feedback appreciated 🙌
I'm not going to say much for design, it looks very bright and lively, although only a few colours were used. Design is absolutely great.
I also love how you arranged the order of the elements in the page. It captured my attention fully, as I scrolled all the way down to the bottom.
One thing that I could suggest to you is to add an overlay if the user scrolls up. Users usually scroll up when they're about to leave, and adding a CTA right before they leave, perhaps one where they can try the demo, or put their email, could increase user engagement.
I hope that my comments are of value to you. Cheers!
Well done! Design is very nice.
My feedback :
if i was you, i will interchange the subtitle ("Keep an eye on competition without lifting a finger!") and the head title ("Your all-in-one competitor analysis tool.")
Benefits first! always. No exception.
Very important improvement : i will add a call to action button in your header (after the link to pricing). Very Small move but very efficient action!
Hope that will help you!
Thanks for the tip with the call to action. Added it right away. I'll think about the text change. Thanks a lot! 🙌
I love it, I think you did a pretty good job, the design is clean, modern, and elegant.
The only think that I can nitpick is you probably can put in some work on your logo it looked pretty sloppy and doesn't match your website at all haha.
If you don't mind me asking, where do you get your illustration arts from?
I got them from envato elements. I did some customizations to them as they didn't fit exactly for my use cases and color sheme. https://elements.envato.com/de/landing-page-templates-flat-concept-5VHK6U
I like the page and design as well ))))